Where are you..... A poem by Sirhasan

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Where are you

Where are you my darling , my only love

Of this hard life I had enough

I searched for you far and near

But find nothing , except my tear

In vain did I look everywhere

In every spot I began to stare

I looked at the sky and saw your face

Smiling to me as always the case

I looked at the waves of the silent sea

And saw you again , looking at me

Your baby face and shining eyes

Captivated me and strongly ties

I feel you in the air passing by

But can't touch you however I try

Wherever I go , I find you there

Around me and every where

My baby , heart is torn apart

My life stopped , I need to start

I heard your voice calling me

Come on my soul mate , make me be






Sirhasan

[البـارع]

what a nice poem
full of emotions and deep feelings

also, it rhymed well
keep it up

[BloumagrieT]

sirhasan

It's wonderful

Thank you brother

Keep reading and practicing

and we'll see a poet of good taste among us here

Have a nice day

[دمعات حزينة]

[light the moon]

what great pome
I like it
thanks alot
really it is nice

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Thanks to allllllllllllllllll
for their approval and praise
and encouragement

[aussie]

in vain i did look everywhere

smiling to me as alyaws be the case

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Dear aussie

In the first sentence , the inversion is done to give more emphasis

that I looked really every where

In the second sentence , if I add be , it will be a broken rhyme

Thanks for your comment

[cute dream]

i enjoyed reading every single line there ,,

u er really bushing me ,, to show my words which i love making them hidden

u got this prolific imagination

keep it up :)

[Nanosh]

[أنــفاس عــمان]

I liked your way in picturing it all

you have a wonderful ability to write about your feelings

in a warm and so deep way

keep the wonderful job up and up and up

:)

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I liked your way in picturing it all

you have a wonderful ability to write about your feelings

in a warm and so deep way

keep the wonderful job up and up and up

:)

Dear , Your words are so delicate like


a nice


cool


breeze



Thanks indeed

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What about the other members

How do you find it

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[فاتح القدس]

great

very great

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wonderful

words ,

poem ,

and

poet

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we are waiting for more poems from you

[S..S]

searched for you far and near

But find nothing , except my tear



Your baby face and shining eyes

Captivated me and strongly ties

I feel you in the air passing by

But can't touch you however I try

Wherever I go , I find you there

Around me and every where

My baby , heart is torn apart

My life stopped , I need to start



so sweet meanings and poetical poem

Beautiful lines and Wonderful Poet

I enjoy reading it



Thank u so so so much

May Allah Bless Your Heart

[eastrenrose]

I enjoyed reading it.it s very emotional poem
We are waiting new poems

[M.o_o.N]

Masha Allah , nice and romance

The images are soft and I could imagin that beloved one while reading your well written poem.

The sounds , the clear words , the whole rhym ,the air and the pass ... They all made a strong full of love poem.

I enjoyed reading your own greatness and creativity brother Sirhasan . Now I know some of your character Mr.skillful ^_^ I will be waiting for another poem by you :)

Allah may bless your life.

[The Soul Of hope]

u r a great poet

it is so nice

although they r simple words ,but having great wonderful meaning

thanx alot

[مهـرة الـروح]

masha'allah

creative poet

it's great

go on

with my best wishes

MAY ALLAH PROTECT U

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Masha Allah , nice and romance

The images are soft and I could imagin that beloved one while reading your well written poem.

The sounds , the clear words , the whole rhym ,the air and the pass ... They all made a strong full of love poem.

I enjoyed reading your own greatness and creativity brother Sirhasan . Now I know some of your character Mr.skillful ^_^ I will be waiting for another poem by you :)

Allah may bless your life.

How lucky I am to receive such a great
support from a great and a smart person
a prominent and remarkable character
From my heart I say thank you my friend
Because your opinion is very important to me

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[Lancaster]

Masha' Allah

What a nice poem!
:)

[postgraduate]

Sir Hasan

Thanks for those lovely lines .They are as pretty as that person who wrote them . Thanks alot

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Sir Hasan

Thanks for those lovely lines .They are as pretty as that person who wrote them . Thanks alot

Thanks to you dear fo your lovely remark and support

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u r a great poet

it is so nice

although they r simple words ,but having great wonderful meaning

thanx alot

Thanks So Much For Your Nice Comment And Support

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great

very great

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wonderful

words ,

poem ,

and

poet

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we are waiting for more poems from you

Thanks Bro For Your Reaction , I Admire It