A Sad Love Story
She and I had been together for a long time , but something that none of us knew made us apart . I did not see her for a whole week and I really began to go mad . She disappeared Suddenly . I asked about
her everywhere but got no clue .I phoned her mobile hundreds of times but she did not reply .
This went on for a month . A complete month of agony and despair .
During this month my whole life deteriorated . Things changed from bad to worse . My life became very gloomy. The days were depressing and the nights were fearful nightmares . I really was afraid of losing her .
I was not ready to forgo the only thing that made life bearable and worth living . Thus ,
I kept aloof from my friends and relatives .I turned into a lonesome man who kept himself to himself
I did not mixed with my friends . I rarely go out of my home . I just spent hours and hours with
her pictures talking to them . The more I remember our intimate times together , the more I cry .I cry and cry and cry .Finally , I collapsed and then knew nothing . The next morning I wake up very tired and another depressing day begins .
My friends began to feel anxious for me . They tried their best to take me out of this . Whenever they went to a café , a restaurant or a park , they take me with them .They tried to amuse me and made me laugh but I was dying from inside . They did all this to help me get over my love problem .
After three months , I gathered up my courage and tried to lead the normal life that everybody enjoyed
I pretended that I did not care anymore but I did . I pretended that I forgot her but I did not .Something in my heart still reminded me of her . I pretended and pretended but nothing was true .
Then one day , the truth came out .It was Thursday , and I Will never forget it as long as I lived .As I
entered the nearest shopping mall , I bumped into someone who was carrying a plastic bags full of items . May I was day dreaming of her , who knows .I felt embarrassed and began to clear the mess
I made . I began to collect the items from the floor . As I raised my eyes to say sorry , I saw her for the first time .I stood still . I did not believe my eyes . Was it real ? Was it a dream that came true ?
Here she is , as beautiful as she always was .Her lovely face and glimmering eyes that once captivated me .I was greeted with a huge smile . My feelings were a mixture of fear , astonishment , disbelief and happiness . The moment I saw tears falling from her eyes , my legs gave way and I fell to the ground .
I stretched both my arms and cried like a baby and said " Hello , My Love "
The End
I hope You like it – My regards to all .
Note :
This story raises many questions which I preferred not to answer
I Kept the story open – ended to your imagination to fly high and complete it
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة ACME ; 04-11-2010 الساعة 10:44 PM
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A mixture of anger,sadness and
pain will cause
deeeeeeeeeep thinking
with
loooooooong silence
*** So..Sad***
WOOOW
VERY WONDERFULL STORY
thanks
قال الشيخ ابن باز - رحمه الله تعالى -
(الحياة في سبيل الله أصعب من الموت في سبيله)
you have a nice way
in writing story
you keep the reader continue
untill he or she finishes the stroy
thank you for sharing us
we are waiting for your new topics
Thats a sad LOVE story
You break our hearts by telling us this one >>no TEARS loolz
Sirhasan
Masha ' Allah
Very talented person
keep it up please
May Allah keep You a way from sadness
لأن
( الله ربي ) سأبحر في أُمنياتي ..
سأزيدُ رغباتي !
سَأطمع في دُعائي أكثر
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لأن الله رَبي !..
سأطرُق البابَ وإن طال الفَتح
`سأنطَرِحُ على الأعتاب
وإن امتدّ الزمان ،
فحتماً ولابُد ;
سأبكي فرحاً يوماً من دَهشتي بالعطاء
lost lady
Thanks for nice words
May Allah bless You
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
sirhasan
What a lovely story you wrote which is full of feelings
I was imagining it as it happened in front of me
I prefer not to complete it because it has a suitable end
Well done brother and keep going
أم عبدالعزيز
thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks alot
you are very Gifted
right or left this place is the best
Sea breeze
Nanosh
Asoma
Many thanks for your passing
And commenting so nicely
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The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
I hope other members like it
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
it's a great story bother thanks soo much
ok I wish if i can end it with a happy end but because of your topic is " A sad love story"
so I'll end it with a very sad end if you don't mind
don't be depressed all loooooooool
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After a while we sat together and I asked her a rain of questions...where were you, what happened, why did you answer my messages and calls…but she stopped me and said with dropping tears and said: stop it everything has finished between us we won't be together any more" what..? I replied….she stayed silent looking down>>>I continued...ba ba but why? What happened...why are you saying that? I asked…because I got married…she replied…yes he is a rich man who my father likes and there is no chance that we would be together again…she said…before finishing her speech I lost my consciousness ..Finally after that moment I didn't see her ever trying to forget everything but how, can anyone help me please?
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Here and there
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Dear Pink Pen
What a great writer you are . Masha Allah You have prolific imagination
I liked your way of writing so much . Please keep on writing and read a lot
You are and will be a distiguished writer indeed , so carry on
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The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
very nice story
I like it
thanks alot
I hope others find it touching too
I like ur writings
U r gifted
You are endowed writer , poet and what else?
Masha Allah keep up the good work .
Have a blessed day.
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة M.o_o.N ; 07-03-2010 الساعة 10:45 PM
Then you discovered that it wasn't she !0
After a while; you waked up with yourself falling down ur bed !!0
Will this suit to be a good end ??0
Alot of thanks,, great work and pls, accept my passing ...0
thanks a looooooooot it's really a touching story
you have a wonderful way of writing stories & poems
you can only go as far as you puch
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