Sweetheart
what a nice poem
well done
I really liked it
keep on please
The last word I have heard
Still ringing in my ears
Wake all the sleeping memories
Revival the past, open the old wounds
That word you say to breaks the spell
The spell you put on me, for years
Locked my heart, locked my heart
Any one who will knock
No, one come in, no one
Here you are, you come to my life
Like a spring breeze,
Carries all the happiness,
But you did not gave me one
Here you are a ghost I see
No feelings, no words to say
Just cold. Just cold
The spring will go, all that he left
A flower without colour, without smell
Dancing with wind
Waiting for the one
Who will pick her this time
written by eastrenrose
iam waiting for your opoinons
Sweetheart
what a nice poem
well done
I really liked it
keep on please
Here you are, you come to my life
Like a spring breeze,
Carries all the happiness
nice words
i like it
may Allah keeps you
المحبة في الله نعمة من الله ..
فقد الأحبة في الله غربة ..
والتواصل معهم أنس ومسرة ..
هم للعين قرة ..
فسلام على من دام في القلب ذكراهم ..
وإن غابوا عن العين قلنا يا رب احفظهم وارعاهم ..
سبحان الله والحمدلله ولا اله الا الله
My dear sis
eastrenrose
what a wonderful words
)A flower without colour,(
So painful
I like it so much
Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank U
See my picture I am a hero
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A mixture of anger,sadness and
pain will cause
deeeeeeeeeep thinking
with
loooooooong silence
*** So..Sad***
so nice poem
I have enjoyed reading it
keep up the good work
really liked it
thanks for sharing us
happy to be hare
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Here and there
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Thanks for all who read my poem and encourge me.iam really happy you like it .
Masha Allah you have the poets magic . Keep writing dear sister
May Allah Keeps in peace
Our Teach. eastrenrose
Soo .. Wonderful
But I Knew That You Will Write
Something More Brighter .. reflect Who Happy
You Are >> By Allah's Will
Glade To Be Here
God Be With All Times
how a cute words
thx alot sweety
Regards
المجتمعات بأفرادها تتحكم بها التصورات والقيم والإهتمامات التي تشربتها وتبرمجت بها تلقائيا لكن السياسة هي التي تتحكم بالثقافة اتجاها ومحتوى
so beautiful lines
Keep On
thaaaaaaaaaanks very much
you will be agood Poet
right or left this place is the best
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