waaaaaaaaw it is amazing
believe me honey
It is an interesting poem
I really enjoyed when I read it
hey everyone
i would really like to share my first try in writing poems with u
and i really hope u will help me and be supportive
and please please tell me your opinion
It may be my mistake,
but you never give or take.
I did something wrong,
and I hope to belong.
When I needed your love
you weren't there to give.
When I needed you
nothing was true.
I asked for your protection,
you gave me no attention.
All I gain were pains;
all I found were blames.
After all you did to me ,
I will finally feel free.
I have to forgive,
but I won't anymore give .
so0o what do you think ??
waaaaaaaaw it is amazing
believe me honey
It is an interesting poem
I really enjoyed when I read it
What an amazing poem
**PRINCESS**
well done I really liked it
keep on you are a poet project
:)
Full of deep emotions and feelings
Keep it up my dear
I really liked it
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
Si formidable
بالفرنسية تعني
جداااااااا رااااااااااااائعه
can i keep it >>>>>>
Nice one
Keep it up
waiting for more
لأن
( الله ربي ) سأبحر في أُمنياتي ..
سأزيدُ رغباتي !
سَأطمع في دُعائي أكثر
..
لأن الله رَبي !..
سأطرُق البابَ وإن طال الفَتح
`سأنطَرِحُ على الأعتاب
وإن امتدّ الزمان ،
فحتماً ولابُد ;
سأبكي فرحاً يوماً من دَهشتي بالعطاء
thank u everyone for the great support
I really appreciate this encourage
and of course u can keep it
it's all your's
thank u all
I'm really glade u like it
I like it so much
keep up the good work
استغفرالله العظيم واتوب اليه
what a nice poem
i like it tooo much
nice feelings
go ahead
.
thank you my friends
thank you so0o much
i really appreciate this
nice try
try to read more poetry thats will help your in writing
So nice words
Thaaaank
U
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A mixture of anger,sadness and
pain will cause
deeeeeeeeeep thinking
with
loooooooong silence
*** So..Sad***
hello
writing mor my dear
this your topic very very nice
I Like this ....
thank you agine ..
thank you all
it's my pleasure
marvellous........i like it...keep it up my sister
DON'T let the past hold you back, you're missing the good stuff
wooow
we have a brilliant writer...my sis
just keep it up
and in the near future...you will be a famous person
May Allah reward you
من وجد الله فماذا فقد , ومن فقد الله فماذا وجد
so0o what do you think ??
??????????? what
are you Joking
it's beautiful
thanks alot
right or left this place is the best
really nice poem
Keep it up
thanks alot
we are witing more
I would really like to thank you all
for being supportive
and drawing a smile on my face
thank you so mush
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