Tattooed Hooves

[aussie]

this is a poem by a simple guy

i hope to hear your opinions about it


Tattooed Hooves

The outline of horses' hooves
are tattooed into the drought-baked road
White clay gravel hard, and the echo of the long-past canter
chips the hidden resonance of this seldom used road.

Only the soft sibilance
of rain will free the hoof imprints,
free them to chase echoes of a ride taken
along the rattling throat of drought




your honest opinions are valuable to me

Regards

[BloumagrieT]

aussie

I'm not an expert but I can sense a beautiful mind

lies within those lines .. A unique way of writing and well composed lines

You chose your words carefully to the extent that I can really see and hear

everything .. I loved totally so keep going

[aussie]

BloumagrieT thank you for your comment

and if i assumed that this lovely poem is mine i will be then a plagiariser

but as i said up there it is a poem by a simple guy

and i'm not that guy

cheers

[sad silence]

I find it strange but while reading , Its remind me with the literary lines
may be the rythem is weak but
the content is great I realy enjoy reading it


Many Thanks to you

[aussie]

sad silence thank you for commenting