Memory

[habeeb]

I Can Remember Our Sorrow,i Can Remember Our LaughteR;
I Know Surely We Kissed And Cried And Ate Together;
I Remember Our Places And Games,and Plans We Had-----
The Title House And How All Came To Nahght------
Remember Well::
But I Cannot Remember Our Love ,,
I Cannot Remember Our Love....

[a girl]

why???

he can remember
everything except his love??
it's sad

thank u for the post

[habeeb]

thanks alot dear girl honestlly u r soooooooo sweet to read mine
accept my best regards

[Aseel]

So nice


, Well, if he remebers all of that

if he remembers the sorrow and the laughter, the kisses and the place the went to


then ,sure, he remembers that LOVE

:)

[enigma]

habeeb

I think all of these memories are part of that love , aren't they? o

[Try To Reach]

habeeb

How are you pal
plz bear with us my friend we want the good for ya


its so beautiful to write such thing but as Aseel and enigma said
Why ? since you remind every thing related to Love
but not the love itself

i can see what you mean but keep in mind that the poems has its own readers
that read such thing as a contradiction "Sorry" but for me it is a sweet contradiction believe me

at any rate, you have to take care when writing again
especially your title

let us see more my friend
you are the best


best wishes

[زهرة وفى]

Oh, Pity darling

It is sorrow poem

thanks my dear

accpet my passing