It Is Purely My Poetry

**jimnext** · 23-05-2008, 03:09 AM

THE SOLUTION

When I got no one to tell
I got the world just like hell

When the eyes turned hot and red
and the tears were not allowed to shed

When the heart was sad
and the sences became dead

When people were around me
and no one was in search of me

When I was alone in the crowd
and no one heard my shout

When the falling down was rain
and the rising up was pain

When the sorrows were born
and I got myself torn

When the heart was broken
and the soul was shaken

When the need was hope
and the hopelessness was top

When no one could coup with the situation
then ALLAH becomes the only solution

**الواثقة بالله** · 23-05-2008, 03:58 AM

WOW it is really amazing poem

Lovely sharing & keep going

Best regards

**jimnext** · 23-05-2008, 12:08 PM

thanks
for lovin' that

**ريما الحسين** · 23-05-2008, 01:23 PM

coooooool poem thanks my brother and never stop

go ahead

**صمت الحرمان** · 23-05-2008, 01:29 PM

great poem go on

**رساويه** · 23-05-2008, 07:26 PM

it's amazing keep going

**alraad3** · 24-05-2008, 11:58 PM

thank you , jim next, keep going. wonderful lines.

**jimnext** · 25-05-2008, 01:00 AM

thanks for all the complements you have given me
thanks to all

**the smart lady** · 25-05-2008, 07:40 PM

yr poem reflects ur great faith which u have in God, I ask Allah to help us because (( as u said )) he is our helper in our problems& our solution.

thaanks darling
keep ur nice choices,