please comment on my choice of peom selection
[GRADE="0000FF FFA500 FF1493 008000"][GLOW="CC3366"]Beyond the Darkness
In times of growing fear, in violence's full rein,
the truth is pushed aside, while innocence is slain.
The serpent's grip is tightened, as evil takes it's toll,
the journey lies uphill, for the wandering, weary, soul.
Sorrow is well known, from generations of the past,
the future is uncertain, yet sure to feel the wrath.
But through this darkened tunnel, a light is up ahead,
past the many wars, and tears that aren't yet shed.
A pact that has been made, a promised land will be,
the good shall overcome, the evil will recede[/GLOW][/GRADE]
please comment on my choice of peom selection
Mr.Anwar
A good choice indeed
May Allah bless you
waiting for more
^__^
well done brother
for sure it will be a great selection coz you pick it up
thank you bro
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Here and there
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For sure your commentry pushes me ahead to add more selectiona because I am interested and specialized in English and American literature.
There'll be a time when this wondering and weary soul
will fly and sense it's freedom not on the top of that hill
but up above high from the sky where all the worries and difficulties
will look even tinier and smaller
Thanks brother
Ireally enjoyed it so keep the good choices coming
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