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الموضوع: At Home Alone

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية ACME
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    Sm121 At Home Alone

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    A story to complete
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    Enjoy listening and complete the story the way you like...
    Here is the audio

    http://www.mediafire.com/download/7y...%27s+story.rar

    //

    The candle has blown out , extinguished
    and darkness shrouded the whole place

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    شخصية بارزة
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    Feb 2012
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    بجانب البحر حيث الهدوء الذي تصحبه الهيبة
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    رد: At Home Alone

    I completed it from my imagination ^^
    ,
    Do you want us to put it here !
    .
    .
    Thank you my teacher
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة بحر الأماان ; 28-07-2014 الساعة 12:15 AM
    " أبي النائم في أحد القبور اسأل الله العظيم أن يجعلني احتضنك حضناً طويلاً دافئاً
    ينزع وحشة فراقك الموجعة عند باب الفردوس الأعلى يا أحد يا فرد يا صمد يا الله " .
    .
    كفارة المجلس :
    " سبحانك اللهم وبحمدك ، اشهدُ أن لا إله إلا أنت ، استغفرك وأتوب إليك "

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية ACME
    تاريخ التسجيل
    Feb 2009
    الدولة
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    رد: At Home Alone

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة بحر الأماان مشاهدة المشاركة
    I completed it from my imagination ^^
    ,
    Do you want us to put it here !
    .
    .
    Thank you my teacher

    It is optional of course . you can complete it for yourself
    or you can share your story here with your friends
    The most important thing is your impression about it
    BTW, you can use this kind of writing with your students
    to improve their writing ability and enhance their vocabulary
    Thanks in advance
    .

    The candle has blown out , extinguished
    and darkness shrouded the whole place

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    شخصية بارزة
    تاريخ التسجيل
    Feb 2012
    الدولة
    بجانب البحر حيث الهدوء الذي تصحبه الهيبة
    المشاركات
    9,530
    معدل تقييم المستوى
    480177

    رد: At Home Alone

    I love happy ending , so I imagine that Jack the prisoner
    came to Linda's house to recharge his phone to call his friend
    who told him about his mother's death and helped him in escaping
    for the first sight , Jack thinks that Linda's house was empty
    so he was shocked when he saw Linda
    ,
    Linda excluded that Jack is the runaway prisoner when she saw him
    for he has a good looking and wearing a neat clothes
    they sat together and talking in every thing Jack noticed that Linda is a smart girl
    and innocent girl so he told her the truth about his escaping
    Jack : Linda I want to tell you the truth , I ran because of my mother's death,
    I didn't see her since I entered the prison when I was 14 at your age,
    she refused to come to visit and she didn't answer my phone.
    Maybe she believes that I'm guilty because I killed her husband
    Linda : Oh my God , and do you did that !.
    Linda was inquisitive girl
    Jack : I quarrelled with him because he hit my mother at that night caused her to enter in a coma ,
    and his head hit to the wall so he died
    ,
    after 10 years , Linda came out of the court
    wearing Law Firm Dress , she saw a man standing in front of his car
    she told herself I know that face quite well,
    it's because of him I became a lawyer
    Jack was waiting for Linda, when he raise his head he saw her looking at him
    he smiled at her saying : I'm free now can we go on a date !
    ,
    ,
    the end
    ,
    I make it very short.

    It's a good strategy we can use it in teaching
    .
    .
    Thanks again my teacher
    " أبي النائم في أحد القبور اسأل الله العظيم أن يجعلني احتضنك حضناً طويلاً دافئاً
    ينزع وحشة فراقك الموجعة عند باب الفردوس الأعلى يا أحد يا فرد يا صمد يا الله " .
    .
    كفارة المجلس :
    " سبحانك اللهم وبحمدك ، اشهدُ أن لا إله إلا أنت ، استغفرك وأتوب إليك "

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية ACME
    تاريخ التسجيل
    Feb 2009
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    ....................
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    8,800
    معدل تقييم المستوى
    187319

    رد: At Home Alone

    بحر الأماان

    Honestly , I enjoyed reading your story and the way you develop the plot

    Yes , you can use this technique with your brilliant students to motivate
    them to use English and express their feelings freely
    Thanks a bundle

    The candle has blown out , extinguished
    and darkness shrouded the whole place

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