I completed it from my imagination ^^
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Do you want us to put it here !
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Thank you my teacher
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A story to complete
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Enjoy listening and complete the story the way you like...
Here is the audio
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The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
I completed it from my imagination ^^
,
Do you want us to put it here !
.
.
Thank you my teacher
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة بحر الأماان ; 28-07-2014 الساعة 12:15 AM
" أبي النائم في أحد القبور اسأل الله العظيم أن يجعلني احتضنك حضناً طويلاً دافئاً
ينزع وحشة فراقك الموجعة عند باب الفردوس الأعلى يا أحد يا فرد يا صمد يا الله " .
.
كفارة المجلس :
" سبحانك اللهم وبحمدك ، اشهدُ أن لا إله إلا أنت ، استغفرك وأتوب إليك "
It is optional of course . you can complete it for yourself
or you can share your story here with your friends
The most important thing is your impression about it
BTW, you can use this kind of writing with your students
to improve their writing ability and enhance their vocabulary
Thanks in advance
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The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
I love happy ending , so I imagine that Jack the prisoner
came to Linda's house to recharge his phone to call his friend
who told him about his mother's death and helped him in escaping
for the first sight , Jack thinks that Linda's house was empty
so he was shocked when he saw Linda
,
Linda excluded that Jack is the runaway prisoner when she saw him
for he has a good looking and wearing a neat clothes
they sat together and talking in every thing Jack noticed that Linda is a smart girl
and innocent girl so he told her the truth about his escaping
Jack : Linda I want to tell you the truth , I ran because of my mother's death,
I didn't see her since I entered the prison when I was 14 at your age,
she refused to come to visit and she didn't answer my phone.
Maybe she believes that I'm guilty because I killed her husband
Linda : Oh my God , and do you did that !.
Linda was inquisitive girl
Jack : I quarrelled with him because he hit my mother at that night caused her to enter in a coma ,
and his head hit to the wall so he died
,
after 10 years , Linda came out of the court
wearing Law Firm Dress , she saw a man standing in front of his car
she told herself I know that face quite well,
it's because of him I became a lawyer
Jack was waiting for Linda, when he raise his head he saw her looking at him
he smiled at her saying : I'm free now can we go on a date !
,
,
the end
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I make it very short.
It's a good strategy we can use it in teaching
.
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Thanks again my teacher
" أبي النائم في أحد القبور اسأل الله العظيم أن يجعلني احتضنك حضناً طويلاً دافئاً
ينزع وحشة فراقك الموجعة عند باب الفردوس الأعلى يا أحد يا فرد يا صمد يا الله " .
.
كفارة المجلس :
" سبحانك اللهم وبحمدك ، اشهدُ أن لا إله إلا أنت ، استغفرك وأتوب إليك "
بحر الأماان
Honestly , I enjoyed reading your story and the way you develop the plot
Yes , you can use this technique with your brilliant students to motivate
them to use English and express their feelings freely
Thanks a bundle
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
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