Iam asking you for correction

[Inner Directed]

Hello every body,,,
Iam asking you for correct this paragraph
which I’ll write in my exam


With abundant thanks

The paragraph:
There are people who let a special impression in our selves , my bosom pal Eptesam is one of them or maybe she is the best . We are in agreement all the time. And that makes our friendship a glorious tking. Actually, I like her because she is known for her honesty and great morals . As a matter of fact , those days , it is a difficult thing to have a friend like her. So, I will try to avoid losing her . She is like a soulmate for me. May Allah protect her and all the best of luck for the best friends ever.

Iam waiting for your opinions

[teacher.A]

Hello Inerr Dircted,

Iam sorry for the delay,


I really admire your level

you are so great

There are no mistakes>>>>just spelling mistakes,but I know that they are unwitting mistakes


keep up the good work

[Inner Directed]

Thank you ,Teacher.A

you mean(thing

you are right,it is an unwitting mistake

I deeply appreciate your answer

God bless you

[ambitious123]

Hello, Inner Directed
Really, I'm happy to see your wonderful style in writing.
I hope that u keep on learning English.

[Inner Directed]

Thnk you,Ambitious



your words gave me a great motivation

God bless you