a story by : Try

[Try To Reach]

I have written this story three or four years ago
so if is there any grammar mistakes plz never mention it looooooool




here you'll find the same story in Arabic




it was late night .



When I was walking through the streets, I was thinking of what to buy !
I tried to remember what my mother told me to buy, damn !! she will got angry if I came home without what she asked me to get !

In my way, and while I was reminding what to buy …
I passed by some kind of truck it is a " jeep" I guess !

but apparently it was moving.

The car was moving !!!!! Do you read me??? the car was moving slowly from right to left and the other way around !!!

Nobody were there no one in the street except myself !! Also, the street was dark and no lamps were there

which makes it terrifying me before that shit started to move !

So, my heart starts his job beating at a high level ! so strong too hard !! trembling
Actually, it was a terrible situation because, I still at the beginning of the street and there is a long journey I have to do a crossing that evil street and to go through it !


I dare to give a step after step and the car still silent no sounds no moving

For the Eleventh step, or say so, I felt as the car revert to move again but, this time sound comes out sound like a moaning so I give my feet a little bit of courageous and weeeeeeeer foreerra ! running through the
street as a crazy guy



.By the End of the street I felt save I felt ok ! everything is all right except the money !
I have lost my mother's money in that evil street I won't come back to it again
Will at least this night !


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coming back home imagine the situation you will laugh at me !! but I won't talk any further…


next day , afternoon :.

the next day in a daylight I returned to that street. Of course I have company this time, the people around me I talk to this I talk to that.. everything is ok !
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So now I can check out this scary car and scary street !
Therefore, I watched that car which made me terrifying
last night ! in fact I gave it a glance no more ! I dare not to get near from it
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Anyway, it is still there ! I wonder who is the owner of it, and why he parks it there with no cars !
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I asked some of my friends to help me waiting for anyone to come and drive this horrible car !



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5 minutes later,
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He " my friend" tells me : why you want to wait for this car ?
I've got astonished what to say to him !
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suddenly I found something !
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I said to him : yes I'm waiting for this car in order to know it belongs to who ?
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what a smart answer huh !
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He fires me another stupid question by saying: why you want to see its owner do you have anything to say to him ??
Well ! what to say now if I answered him again he won't stop questioning ! so I totally ignored him!
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He return with the same question ! now I answered him in abridgment saying !
If you want to wait with me please keep silent otherwise, you can go !
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He gives a strong react by saying
What a stupidity from you dear liquid milk !!
do you think I'm a fool one to be led by the nose
to the hell dear to the hell ( or say so !
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I said thank you ( yejee menak Akthar !
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I continued waiting for any clue that might help me know what makes that car moving last night but unconsciously, I walked and have looked at the ground searching for the money I have lost last night and I forgot that it was afternoon and people can't left such 50 riyals dancing on the floor!
All the morning !!
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do you think so !!
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After one completely slowly and wearily hour I decided to return to the same street at night but first, I will search for a new friend to help me instead of that angry one.
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It will be a crazy night I will take my weapon which include
5 RBGs , 21 stinger missiles , 10 grenades and 15 c4
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With a stench from my back

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End of part 1.

[Meant To be]

wow

The same old story that I will never forget, but this time in English

Bloody hell, what a story, you know what brother, I feel like I love it this time in contrary with the one written in Arabic

I like the way you used the suitable words here,with those weapons, you remind me with that game called " Metal Gear " you know me well that I loved it so much it's been more than 5 years man


Anyway, As you mentioned above about the grammatical mistakes, needless to mention'em

Go ahead man for the 2nd part, we'll be waiting you

Wish you best of luck

[Samaya]

Hi brother ,,,,Good morning

You have a nice story

but ( if you don't mind(

I think the word
damn
not good for us to use it as a muslims
isn't?

Try To Reach
I hope the happiness is your road

[القلب الساهي]

asalam alikom
so nice story
and we will be wite for part 2

thanks alot

[enigma]

You haven't changed much you had the same sense of humer of TTR that we know now

Lovely and funny story

Waiting to know what happened next

[Just.4.ur.iz]

nice story

waiting for the next part

[Try To Reach]

wow

The same old story that I will never forget, but this time in English

Bloody hell, what a story, you know what brother, I feel like I love it this time in contrary with the one written in Arabic

I like the way you used the suitable words here,with those weapons, you remind me with that game called " Metal Gear " you know me well that I loved it so much it's been more than 5 years man


Anyway, As you mentioned above about the grammatical mistakes, needless to mention'em

Go ahead man for the 2nd part, we'll be waiting you

Wish you best of luck

yes it is



Meant To Be

looooooooooool you never like me in arabic too
hehehehehe

you prefer to talk with me in English more than Arabic but look i do NOT

i do See nothing like Arabic

Arabic is the most expressional language ever

and you thin *** hehehehe go to your friend that Chrise or i don't know

or you know go to that old briotish woman hehehehehehe

you 'd kill me now

anyway go go

heheheheheh

[Try To Reach]

Hi brother ,,,,Good morning

You have a nice story

but ( if you don't mind(

I think the word
damn
not good for us to use it as a muslims
isn't?

Try To Reach
I hope the happiness is your road

yeah sister you are right
but there are many words nowadays you can't tell one from another either if that is wrong or this
actually no need for debate

here we go : I ask Allah forgiveness for me and you and all muslims

and i wish for you what you wish to me

stay near

[Try To Reach]

asalam alikom
so nice story
and we will be wite for part 2

thanks alot

Wa Alycom As-Salam Wa Rahmatu Allahi Wa Barakatuh dear Sir

you are the nice one

thank you

and be close

[Try To Reach]

You haven't changed much you had the same sense of humer of TTR that we know now

Lovely and funny story

Waiting to know what happened next

good then sister and thank God
i'm the same one as before

and look thats because of you

honey always drops honey

[Try To Reach]

nice story

waiting for the next part

Just.4.MY .iz

thank you sister
and you are welcome on abroad

H.E.A.V.E.N. for yoy

[Aseel]

I don't believe , it's the same story we've read in Al Isteraha


I remeber I laughed so much on that story



Wait a minute


Isn't there a part missing



I think you wrote someting about going back home but you didn't mention it here


hhhhhhhhhhhhh


I really enjoyed reading it again


When I read the title, I said

"here is TTR , let me start by reading his story for he knows how to draw the smile on our face "

:)

Thanks alot , dear brother


Wish u the best with your preparations

[Try To Reach]

I don't believe , it's the same story we've read in Al Isteraha


I remeber I laughed so much on that story



Wait a minute


Isn't there a part missing



I think you wrote someting about going back home but you didn't mention it here


hhhhhhhhhhhhh


I really enjoyed reading it again


When I read the title, I said

"here is TTR , let me start by reading his story for he knows how to draw the smile on our face "

:)

Thanks alot , dear brother


Wish u the best with your preparations

all smiles are flying around here

Aseel

Welcome back sis


never feel disappointed cause of some stupid people
we have many these days they are acting before thinking

come on sis we can never work in here and you are not around

welcome and happy staying


Try

(:

[Aseel]

all smiles are flying around here

Aseel

Welcome back sis


never feel disappointed cause of some stupid people
we have many these days they are acting before thinking

come on sis we can never work in here and you are not around

welcome and happy staying


Try

(:

Seems you know well what's going on with me :)


you know


I'm so lucky to have such a brother here :)



Best of luck ever

[Try To Reach]

loooooooooooool

you just noticed it

this injustice Aseel

loooooooooooool

just kidding sis let's be more optimistic

stay near sister

[Try To Reach]

Sorry for late every one but i have many things to do these days

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Let's summarize what we have in the first part in these points


Highlights

[FRAME="11 70"]

It was about a small journey to the grocery.
And while I was walking through a strange street .
I passed by a truck , but incidentally this truck has moved
I got surprised what to do until I run away head over heels
But I lost my mother money
So I have to come back again to the same street
I gave it one try and we will see in this part the new things
Be happy and terrified with me here
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.[/FRAME]


As I mentioned up there I have to come back to that street again
But the problem was about the friend that supposed to help me in doing this panic trip at midnight were nobody can be there
!


In Al Ghamdy mosque
At El-Isha'a prayer


I have prayed next to an old and trustworthy friend . After the prayer I have sat at the back waiting for everybody to leave and then, I can have a small dialogue with my friend .
He was Ibrahim . not everybody have left the mosgue but there was few of African elder people so I dare to get near from him he understands that I was meaning him So he said to me before I said even a word ! : How are you dear Abdulaziz How is your college ?
I said everything is Ok al Hamud Lellah how about you … and you know the rest of our greeting rubbish words !!!!!!


We have talked for 10 minutes or maybe more until he sat calm for seconds and I have make use of these seconds enough to fire him with my subject…. At the end he agreed to have a walk with me at mid night and offers me a nice dinner in the near restaurant it was about
masoop you see I'm lucky
Four hours and the midnights comes to appear in an ugly and dismay
face


I have to carry my Weapons as I said before but I have got nothing to be carried except that I should wear a light clothes that I can rush away speeeeeeeedly !! in case sth wrong happened .



I said to my mother my father my brothers and sisters farewell to you I may not come again !! (as I'm planning to go to war )
I have just remembered a nice poem that describes this situation very well
: It says

He has taken up his two little babies,
Kissed them baith cheek and chain
"O fair ye weel, myain two babes,
For I'll never see you again


I called my friend Ibrahim and he is waiting for me already at the same street. I aimed at that street to chick with him anything new ! in my way to the street I passed by friends


they invited me to sit with them but I gave them a quick excuse and complete walking …. Until I arrived to the street I have found everything quite calm as a silence of graves I looked at the place that the car usually parked in but I saw nothing my friend call upon me so I
: came to him and we have this dialogue

Ibrahim: yes dear how is you?
Me: everthing is ok ( kolo tamam )
Ibrahim: I saw nothing your car doesn't come
Me: well I don't know
Ibrahim: should we wait
Me: as you like
Ibrahim: well let's take a hike and come again
Me: good idea come on


We walk in the streets for 15 minutes or more and then we said that we will go home but before that we have to return to the street first !
We reached the street around 1 past 15 but unexpectedly we found the car and we found it parking in the middle of the street near the wall of
the school


My friend said we should hide now and see your claim !!
I said that’s good let's do it we have to conceal our self that no body can sees us


Minutes and Minutes waiting in a cold street and suddenly we glance a light a very light light coming from the car it seems to be a light of phone mobile ….


The light was as speed as a gleam that we were not sure if it is true but the existence of the car itself leaves no doubts about it especially with the sudden movement that was before
!!

So we continued waiting and my friend Ibrahim said that if there is somebody in the car we should look for him instead of the foolish waiting that lead to nothing but the escape of that unknown person !!
He my friend dares to get near from the car and checks it out from a very near distance and then he cried out that there are two people in
the car he beating at the car so hard and…..


I came to him and see that there is a boy with his girlfriend inside the car ( what a shameful place ) I got embarrassed and stayed calm
while my friend Ibrahim is shouting, screaming and striking against the car to be opened but the boy inside the car was really smart that he closed the doors before he start doing his chit
!!


Everything were in seconds and the boy turn on his engine and run away
we lost him we don't know who is he but all what we know is the palette number .


THE END

[sho24sho]

wow thanks
i didn't read it before
its really intresting
i couldn't stop reading till the end
really its great and ur grammar is good either
thanx alot
plz keep writing such stories

[Try To Reach]

you are welcome sister

and thanx a lot

Glad you like it

best wishes

^_^