what a nice poem
full of emotions and deep feelings
also, it rhymed well
keep it up
Where are you
Where are you my darling , my only love
Of this hard life I had enough
I searched for you far and near
But find nothing , except my tear
In vain did I look everywhere
In every spot I began to stare
I looked at the sky and saw your face
Smiling to me as always the case
I looked at the waves of the silent sea
And saw you again , looking at me
Your baby face and shining eyes
Captivated me and strongly ties
I feel you in the air passing by
But can't touch you however I try
Wherever I go , I find you there
Around me and every where
My baby , heart is torn apart
My life stopped , I need to start
I heard your voice calling me
Come on my soul mate , make me be
Sirhasan
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة ACME ; 15-01-2011 الساعة 11:25 PM
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
what a nice poem
full of emotions and deep feelings
also, it rhymed well
keep it up
.
sirhasan
It's wonderful
Thank you brother
Keep reading and practicing
and we'll see a poet of good taste among us here
Have a nice day
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" اللهم استعملني في طاعتك "
/
أستغفر الله العظيم التواب الرحيم لذنبي
وللمسلمين والمسلمات و المؤمنين والمؤمنات
الأحياء منهم والأموات إلى يوم الدين
اطفال بغداد
حسبي الله ونعم الوكيل وكفى
what great pome
I like it
thanks alot
really it is nice
Thanks to allllllllllllllllll
for their approval and praise
and encouragement
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
in vain i did look everywhere
smiling to me as alyaws be the case
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة BloumagrieT ; 25-01-2010 الساعة 11:35 PM سبب آخر: Arabic isn't allowed in the club
اللهم صلي و سلم و زد و بارك على سيدنا و حبيبنا و قدوتنا محمد -صلى الله عليه وسلم
Dear aussie
In the first sentence , the inversion is done to give more emphasis
that I looked really every where
In the second sentence , if I add be , it will be a broken rhyme
Thanks for your comment
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
i enjoyed reading every single line there ,,
u er really bushing me ,, to show my words which i love making them hidden
u got this prolific imagination
keep it up :)
I liked your way in picturing it all
you have a wonderful ability to write about your feelings
in a warm and so deep way
keep the wonderful job up and up and up
:)
سبحان الله وبحمده
سبحان الله العظيم
What about the other members
How do you find it
.
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
great
very great
=========
wonderful
words ,
poem ,
and
poet
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we are waiting for more poems from you
التربية قبل التعليم
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خذ من زمانك ما صفا ** ودعِ الذي فيه الكـدرْ
إن الزمان سينقضي ** فلم التخاصـم والضجرْ
واترك همومك للذي ** خلق البسيطة والبشـرْ
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هنا أهم أعمال أخوكم فاتح القدس المدرسية
searched for you far and near
But find nothing , except my tear
Your baby face and shining eyes
Captivated me and strongly ties
I feel you in the air passing by
But can't touch you however I try
Wherever I go , I find you there
Around me and every where
My baby , heart is torn apart
My life stopped , I need to start
so sweet meanings and poetical poem
Beautiful lines and Wonderful Poet
I enjoy reading it
Thank u so so so much
May Allah Bless Your Heart
See my picture I am a hero
http://en.tackfilm.se/?id=1270748474625RA49
A mixture of anger,sadness and
pain will cause
deeeeeeeeeep thinking
with
loooooooong silence
*** So..Sad***
I enjoyed reading it.it s very emotional poem
We are waiting new poems
Masha Allah , nice and romance
The images are soft and I could imagin that beloved one while reading your well written poem.
The sounds , the clear words , the whole rhym ,the air and the pass ... They all made a strong full of love poem.
I enjoyed reading your own greatness and creativity brother Sirhasan . Now I know some of your character Mr.skillful ^_^ I will be waiting for another poem by you :)
Allah may bless your life.
u r a great poet
it is so nice
although they r simple words ,but having great wonderful meaning
thanx alot
أمنياتي |مُعلقة ب سلسلة من السماء . . س تتحققْ ذاتَ يوم !
masha'allah
creative poet
it's great
go on
with my best wishes
MAY ALLAH PROTECT U
مهـرة الـروح
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
Masha' Allah
What a nice poem!
:)
Sir Hasan
Thanks for those lovely lines .They are as pretty as that person who wrote them . Thanks alot
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