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that is great
i like me your poem
thank you
i hope than she see this it
salam dear brothers and sister.
here is my poem about Gaza that i've written a couple of years ago .i hope u will like it
As the dark night comes to Gaza
The tragedies come with.
The little baby cries in darkness
Until he can't breathe
He cannot sleep a wink
cuz no milk is left to drink.
There's no food, there's no bread
But there's pain in their stead
So, the poor mum can do nothing
But only her warm tears to shed
Weeping so much while asking:
What's up with this crazy world?
Why do others keep so silent?
Why cannot they say a word?
Are they so mute and deaf…
That my cries cannot be heard?
Is it my fate to be jailed…
In a cage just like a bird. ?
Who can say: "”No for the siege!"
Tell me who can really dare?
Who can give my kids some food?
Who can show them love and care?
oh
that is great
i like me your poem
thank you
i hope than she see this it
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiice
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Twinkle ; 23-12-2011 الساعة 03:36 PM
Very nice poem
Alah bless you
Keep going
thank you all for your comments .Allah bless you all
It is really meaningful poem speaks about our people there
no can read it whithout feeling shame because we can not do nothing for him
May Allah help them to comeover this bad situation
and forgive us
thank you so much for sharing
oooh sweet words bro it's truelly toched
it's really full of pain and suffer
i liked ur description, as u descriped Gaza as a cage and the people in it as birdz
thanx bro 4 sharing & keep on
MAY ALLAH BLESS U+
Thank you........
How sweet of you to dedicate those words for brothers in Gaza
Bless you
I realy enjoy reading it
very nice words
thanks
^_^
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