مين يصحح لي البراقرف ؟

**كتكوتهـ** · 29-01-2012, 02:16 AM

Who is will correct to me this paragraph ?

please dont change the worlds , just correct the mistakes

without change the paragrapgh

King Abduallah Al Saud

He is king of humanity , king of hearts , and king of kind . King Abduallah is king of Saudi Arabia . He loves all the people not just in Saudi Arabia, but also all people and he helps anyone wants help from him. He made a lot of things in Saudi Arabia , for example : Al Mamlkah tower , Al Faislia Tower , and Clock of Makkah . also he spent a lot of money to expand the campus of Makkah much bigger . He ordered to make a train of feelings in Makkah . the people agreed to name him king of humanity , because if anyone in the world ask him to help he will help him . He visits sick people in hospitals . He loves the children and there are a lot of photos for him with children in internet . King Abduallah is the most famous person in history in my opinion because his accomplishments in the world are very important speciality the campus of Makkah and campus of Madina because these are the most important places in the world .

**MOHAMMEDSALEH** · 29-01-2012, 02:34 PM

He is the king of humanity , the king of hearts , and king of kindness. King Abduallah is the king of Saudi Arabia . He loves all the people not just in Saudi Arabia, but also all people over the world and he helps anyone who needs help from him. He made a lot of things in Saudi Arabia , for example : Al Mamlkah tower , Al Faislia Tower , and the Clock of Makkah . also he spent a lot of money to expand the campus of Makkah and made it much bigger . He ordered to make a train Almchaar in Makkah . the people agreed to name him the king of humanity , because if anyone in the world asks him to help he will help him . He visits sick people in hospitals . He loves children and there are a lot of photos of him with children in the internet . King Abduallah is the most famous person in history in my opinion because his accomplishments in the world are very important speciality the campus of Makkah and campus of Madina because these are the most important places in the world .