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السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
بليييييييييييييز اللي يعرف بالقاعدات فضلاً لا امراً ابغاة يشيك ع النص بيطلع اخطااااء وااااجد بس ابغاة يعدلههها لي بذاكرة للاختبار..

When I was a child .The weather was cloudy in my village .First I said to my mother" I want go to the supermarket my mother said no. because the weather maybe get rain . Second I went to my sister and I told her I will go but do not tell anyone . Then I went to the market. When I went out from market the weather was rainy and strong winds I cannot see anything . While I was research for any place to hide in it one body took me for her grocery . I was very afraid .My family were search about me. When the rain stopped I went to my house and mu mother punished me. The experience taught me that I must listen to my mother and do what she said.

[Personanongrata]

Hi there,

Sorry as I changed some words, I guess it will make your paragraph better :)

Once when I was a child, I wanted to go to the supermarket. So I asked my mother for permission. Unfortunately, she didn’t approve because she was afraid the weather might turn bad and there might be heavy rain. Later that day, I went to my sister and told her that I will go out and asked her not to tell anybody. Then I went to the market. Later on when I finished and while I was going out of the market, it started to rain hard and there was strong wind. I could not see anything. While I was searching for a shelter, someone stole my grocery. I was terrified and scared. My family was searching for me everywhere. When the rain stopped, I went back to my house and my mother punished me. The experience taught me that I must listen to my mother and do as she says all the time.

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thanks plenty mesio Personanongrata
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