Hallucination 4

[Try To Reach]

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[glow=FF0000] that dawn
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at that dawn
Almost all people in my city
Either dead or wounded
some bodies have no sign


the very same dawn
the Earth swayed
hugger-mugger* prevailed
heavens twine


the next-dawn
I walked with no shadow
There was no ado
My eyes were full of brine



One dawn later
Nightly, I was fearful to walk
And I wait for too long
To see this dawn
And so I had to recline

such dawn
when the air asphyxiated
Because of the throng
I was waiting
And I will be waiting
To see your dawn
And you 'll never see my resign

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[J.J]

Just like every time ... it's really wonderfull...

For God sake from where do you get your inspiration ? ....

Dear brother you really do have an amazing talent ... you're really gifted ...( Masha'a Allah) ..

Keep up the good .. no not the good !!! .. I wanna say keep up this great work ..

May Allah bless you .. I really enjoy reading your posts .... Thank you 4 giving us this apportunity 2 share with you your great talent ... your golden words .. your thoughts & feelings ... Good luck brother ..

[Salsa]

Say what ??

It`s great to read a post like this

I`m realy glad that I read it

[Try To Reach]

J.J
I'm happy that you liked my work again
you see the inspiration i got is when i practice my little modest english here with you all
and have people like you J.J who likely to thank and appreciate what others do
your highness
stay tuned
my words can never express my appreciate and proud
of you

[Try To Reach]

Salsa
so you have to thank yourself i guess
loooooooooool
i'm kidding

thanx for passing by

[Meant To be]

I really don't have to be impressed
To read such an art from hands-blessed
WOW Bro, it's more than spectacular
What you wrote definitely not popular
Marvelous words beyond imagination
Each line has its own sensation
Words will engrave on golden plate
There will be an extraordinary rate
I might be greedy if I asked you to write
Starting at the moment and every night
But brother! promise me and say
Neither to stop, nor to delay
In fact, honestly I really have to preach
I'm the one who will hopefully Try To Reach
An inspiration you already went through
Unquestionably, I will be guided by you
Brother, neighbor, my friend, and dear
God bless you in everything you share

Dear Alshareef, sometimes I like to express my admiration with poems, because I find myself between the lines, I hope that you accept my humble one, and bear in mind that I wouldn't do so if it's not unique.

Your dazzling dawn overshadowed my sunshine

[T.Sultan]

Alshareef ,

What can I say ?? You have reached Wallahi you have reached what others couldn't reach ... All I can say is you're a talented member. Thank you so much for letting us share with you the craziness you make with your sweet well-wovenwords. Please, keep up the great work.

[Try To Reach]

hey

Meant To Be

i'm really happy you are here again
thanx for sharing your talent too
let me start responding to your Golden words



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I really don't have to be impressed
To read such an art from hands-blessed
WOW Bro, it's more than spectacular
What you wrote definitely not popular
Marvelous words beyond imagination
Each line has its own sensation
Words will engrave on golden plate
There will be an extraordinary rate
I might be greedy if I asked you to write
Starting at the moment and every night
But brother! promise me and say
Neither to stop, nor to delay
In fact, honestly I really have to preach
I'm the one who will hopefully Try To Reach
An inspiration you already went through
Unquestionably, I will be guided by you
Brother, neighbor, my friend, and dear
God bless you in everything you share

Heavens


Meant to be all I can say to you dear
Best Brother and neighbor
is this


In my heart I gathered all my lovers
and the heart is : ruins

my works will never be over
as long as "Meant To Be" amends

Dear Alshareef, sometimes I like to express my admiration with poems, because I find myself between the lines, I hope that you accept my humble one, and bear in mind that I wouldn't do so if it's not unique.

And you are dear,, you are the first dawn
and NOT the next

Your dazzling dawn overshadowed my sunshine

The eye never overtops the eyebrow
you see
we just learn from you dear bro and your beautiful and modest , calm soul

God bless you

[Try To Reach]

T.Sultan

you are welcome and thats because you are so kind dear brother
i'm happy you are here stay close
i'm always looking for your support

[enigma]

I know I'm too late to participate with you in commenting on the beautiful talent you have my brother but, pretty sure that you'll excuse me




All I can say is "Never let anything stop you from expressing yourself freely the way you do" o

[Try To Reach]

hey



No you aren't



you are not late at all and i appreciate you and understood
that nobody can give comments for all threads
so have this in mind dear Best Enigma


look you are the light and of course we need you in this forum and in every single thread
thats we can see through your light others posts
but we can handle on till you come
no matter it takes days , weeks , , or even years

i guess this is a strong one
loooooooooooooooool


No , no really
we all believe in you much more than you imagine

please
never say that again
best ever moderator in this great web site

God bless you
you enigma