Hallucination 5

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Hello Every one
here my new Hallucination
I hope you like it



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For those who care
I've kindled a candle in dark
To fire the words affairs
and see its spark

Once I reached
the middle of nowhere
I've got deadly horrified
and tried to disembark

But do you think I left there
Actually, there wasn't even a mark
Many people said to me quit it
As they truly exhorted me
My fate refused to hark

I might-hey-had your eyes stared
At me or at my writings of lark
As if they say, what a doctrinaire
And as if I say, please : hark

their lies are everywhere
everywhere and plenty
and their well-beloved to us is a mark
to be the best ever cranky

Millions slept with hunger
covered with terror
And walked with fake

And then, they said







God damn you
Awake

No , No
if this what I'm talking about
Is all worthless
Then, why it happens
Why it inflames the tears
In my mother checks
Why it let me watching, feckless
Why years quarrel years

No I'm not a blabber
My alphabet contains only four letters
Its fairly enough to me
To express the feeling of distress

My father said to me once ,
Why, " livid ", my boy !
you ruined its life
Why, " livid ", my boy !
you Crushed it and dive
it’s a joy , you slew
with a knife
my boy watch out !
you may face the same night
Well my father ,, Look
I'm suffering too,
Along with patience
But I heard once upon the time

I say I heard
a wise man said

and you don't have to dig
That grave so deep
Its ok to trick
The Watchdog and leave




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[J.J]

My father said to me once ,
Why, " livid ", my boy !
you ruined its life
Why, " livid ", my boy !
you Crushed it and dive
it’s a joy , you slew
with a knife
my boy watch out !
you may face the same night
Well my father ,, Look
I'm suffering too,
Along with patience
But I heard once upon the time

I say I heard
a wise man said

and you don't have to dig
That grave so deep
Its ok to trick
The Watchdog and leave

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WoOoOoOoW ..

Nothing that I would say ... can describe how wonderful is this one ...

It's more than exceptional ..it's incomparable & extraordinary ...

Brother .. You really have an intelligent and unique talent ... God bless you 4ever ..

And .. Thank you for giving us the honor to be one of those who read your brilliant writings ...

Thanks again ...

[enigma]

You don't have to dig
That grave so deep
It's ok to trick
The Watchdog and leave



Very meaningful,expressive and srong lines

Gorgeous brother

[Salsa]

MMM

God it`s great

really nothing more to add

Thanx

[Meant To be]

and you don't have to dig
That grave so deep
Its ok to trick
The Watchdog and leave

Awesome, wonderful, fascinating,................ add all the words you like buddy

You know I wanted to reply with a poem as I told you before when I read a unique writing I like to express my admiration with one, but execuse my brother, as you know that I'm about to graduate and I'm busy to shit

blessed your hand brother, soon inshallah I might write such forgotten art, you know why coz I learnt from you and I have been inspired, indeed

God bless and protect you, Amen

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J J
you are welcome dear Sister

its more than a sweet meaningful
flies in here as a sweet butterfly for real

to see a first post or comment im my little modest thread
signed with your name of beauty



pleasure in here

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Enigma
you are welcome dear Sister

I'm soo happy you liked that Goute

pleasure in here

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Meant To Be
you are welcome dear best friend annd brother

I asked Allah truley to help you succeed in your studying dear
no matter your comming is more than a poem
its actually the unread poem before
heavens bro



pleasure in here

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Salsa
you are welcome dear

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