.... Why Torture yourself when life

[Try To Reach]

I've made you a design but this time i brought to you a suitable poem
to feel the moment in gazing this design

























Oh gentle winds 'neath moonlit skies
Do not you hear my heartfelt cries

Below the branches, here about
Do not you sense my fear and doubt
Side glistening rivers, sparkling streams
Do not you hear my woeful screams

Upon the meadows, touched with dew
Do not you see my hearts a'skew
Beneath the thousand twinkling stars
Do not you feel my jagged scars

Seek not my mournful heart kind breeze
For you'll not find it 'mongst these trees.

It's scattered 'cross the moonlit skies
Accompanied by heartfelt sighs.
It's drifting o're the gentle rain
A symbol of my silent pain

It's buried 'neath the meadow fair
Conjoined with all the sorrow there
It's lost among the stars this night
Too far to ease my quiet fright

No gentle winds, seek not my heart
For simply ... it has torn apart


by Kit McCallum







Regards
T.T.R

[Meant To be]

I like it, I really do, though it's called Torture

I think it's my first time to read such poem, a description of nature mixed with painful feelings

The designed pic is fit for the poem, nice job


Thanks bro

[GREEN-MOUNTAIN]

so great ... amazing in fact

thanks brother

[enigma]

True

Why agonize ourselves while life is full of agony

We're grateful for the beautiful choice and design

[Try To Reach]

Meant To Be

some times pains bring warm and stable heart
so give it some time
loooooooooool

[Try To Reach]

Great Mountain

you are the amazing fact
you are the man

and thanks for you in advance

[Try To Reach]

Enigma

and me too dear
I'm happy you agreed and liked my thread

thanx a lot