that is very nice and cool
Thanks for this nice words
It's one of my poems which I hope you will like
Mixed feelings of love and hate
i was happy when you loved me
and sad when you left me
i felt the joy in happiness
and i have tasted the tears of sadness
once i was flying in your freedom
but now i am jailed in your kingdom
those days were like heaven
but now i am sleeping in a coffin
you were my warm sun
but now it is too hot to run
every time i see your picture on the wall
i feel mixed that i wanna stumble and fall
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Aseel ; 10-11-2007 الساعة 07:59 PM
that is very nice and cool
Thanks for this nice words
sah ur tongue
ههههههههههههههههههههههه حلوهsah ur tongue
wonderful wordsi was happy when you loved me
and sad when you left me
i felt the joy in happiness
and i have tasted the tears of sadness
once i was flying in your freedom
but now i am jailed in your kingdom
those days were like heaven
but now i am sleeping in a coffin
you were my warm sun
but now it is too hot to run
every time i see your picture on the wall
i feel mixed that i wanna stumble and fall
thanx alot
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Thanks so much
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Aseel ; 10-11-2007 الساعة 07:52 PM
Wo0o0o0o0o0oW
WONDERFUL
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once i was flying in your freedom
but now i am jailed in your kingdom
you are welcome darling
that's a cute poem
thanks for sharing it with us
and waiting for your coming up masterpieces
i felt the joy in happiness
and i have tasted the tears of sadness
emotional words!!
i like it
go ahead my brother/sister
اللهم صلي على محمد ماذكره الذاكرون
وما غفــــــــــــــل عن ذكره الغـــافلون
Thanks for your words
you really embarrased me
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Aseel ; 10-11-2007 الساعة 07:53 PM
So, we have another talented person here :)
It's a beautiful poem
You knew how to use the words
to experess your feelings
Good luck and waiting for more :)
Note
Please write in English for Arabic is not allowed in this section
:)
Big thakss for u
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Thats great
Thanks so much
Fantastic Poem
Thaaaaaaanks a lot
wonderful
thaaaaxxxxxxx
you're a poet
you can transform feeling into words
thanks a lot for the nice poem
go on and remember to share us
Thanks sooo much i appreciate it
thank so much
Thanks
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wonderful....
writ more and i'm very interested in your poems..
good luck
warm break
most people didn't arrive to their dreams because they didn't know themselves enough
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