A short Poem I wrote

[The Seeker]

Hey there,
This is a rough draft of a short poem I wrote. Thought it would be helpful if you read it and gave your wise comments.


I thought my heart was fortified.
So it won’t yield for a look from your eyes.
Yet, oh wicked witch,
You kept casting your spells kiss after kiss.
Until my heart submitted to your every wish.

[still_alive]

wow ma shaa Allah

very nice

that was a very perfect writing bro

keep on please you have the talent to write poems

really you have

ma shaa Allah

wish you all he best

.Your sis

[hidy]

Seeker


...... I like your words

They are realy meaningful

Gooooooooo onnnnnnn

[Abo Lama]

the seeker


thanx alot my brother for ur meaningful poem


u`ve got the skill and u should work on developing it


i`m sure u`ll


keep on plz

[The Seeker]

Thanks alot my freinds your comments meant alot to me. My Allah Bless you.

[URS]

Hi the seeker
it is nice but you seem to be a lover Good Luck Is it possible to know is going be your princess to congratulate you cause we are all members here.

[move=right]Wish you the best[/move]

[Instigator]

.Nice words
Thanks

keeeeeeeeep onnnnnnnnnnnn

[اسيــ حبه ــرة]

Nice words

all the members here have the ability to say

poem... Because the are so romantic persons

Thanks bro, keep on that standard

[صمت]

i wish i got it as they did.but im sorrrrry
can u explain it 4 me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

[ميس]

Thanx The seeker
may Allah bless u