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    انجليزي خبير الصورة الرمزية نت زعيم
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    A030 Miserable Life



    Ladies and gentlemen
    Here it is a broken-heart of Miserable Life
    which I squesszed my feeling then wrote a poem.

    I would like to share it with you.

    Enjoy it

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    Miserable Life

    How could I believe in the darkness,
    Not believing in the shininess…..

    Being lonely is hard to explain,
    In the dark of night, I've felt a pain….

    A pain that lives in my soul,
    No one knows except my soul……

    Finding solutions of problems,
    Damage my brain……

    In the night I see my soul goes out my body,
    And setting in the corner of my room….

    In the night I see my soul remembers,
    What his relatives do to him then starts to cry….

    In the night I hear the crying of my soul,
    Then I cry……

    In the night I realize that my soul has no friends,
    Then I pray to him to have a friend……

    In the night from my soul I figure out,
    He has no trusting in his life…..

    In the night I see my soul tries to kill him self,
    To have a rest of this detestable life…..

    In the night in my room I see everyone hates my soul,
    for no reasons…….

    Why …..why…..why…..and why says my soul, and
    I answer to him leave them then life'll smile to you...

    He looks at me and says you're a mirror,
    I can see myself……

    No one respect you unless you respect your abilities,
    from me talking to him….

    So leave them , life 'll change,
    And you will be happy…..

    Trying to convince him but no way then,
    He opens a window in my chest then get in…..

    Tick tock….. tick tock says the clock,
    Feels boring then rings screamly…..
    I wake up with sad moment,
    And falling the tears from my eyes….

    I couldn't describe my miserable life,
    But my soul does
    ….
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة نت زعيم ; 23-12-2007 الساعة 03:14 PM

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية enigma
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    Dear brother

    Thanks for sharing your feelings with us

    I'm no expert critic in poetry

    But I think you need to work on your word structure

    It seems if I'm not mistaken that you wrote in Arabic and then tried to translate it

    Thanks again for choosing your club to express how you felt

    We'll be glad to read more of your writings
    عفوا ......!!

    حتى صمت العالم تبدد .......!!

    إلا صمتي في كل حين يتجدد .......!!

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    انجليزي فعال الصورة الرمزية so quiet
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    Well Done
    I'm really impressed by the way you express your feelings it is not an easy thing to do
    you really have a talent just preserve it and try to enhance it, Masha Allah you are creative

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    شخصية بارزة الصورة الرمزية مــلك الحرف
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    Thank you for the wonderful topic

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    انجليزي مشارك الصورة الرمزية ChaRmEr
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    A046 Wonderful

    ^_^


    You may feel alone and believe your alone, but God is right there.0o0

    I enjoyed reading ur poem

    Many Thaks & keep up
    :

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    اللــــهــــــم إنــــي أسألك الجــنــــــــة

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