,Brother ASTRO
.I cannot get enough of your magic words
.You are just like mirage, impossible to catch
.Keep it up
Dear Instigator
I can never thank you enough for your supporting words. God bless you
Dear Enigma
I shall keep writing those stories till doomsday if it pleases you. My fingers dance with joy typig as they know that your eyes will read what they type
To you, Lady of Mystry, I present the next story
Like Two Ships
He entered the elevator
i"Ground floor, please," he said
He sounds nice, she thought, but he wouldn't notice me
He noticed. He noticed her standing there, eyes straight ahead. But he didn't blame her
Nice perfume, she thought as they parted, he lightly stroking his disfigured face, she counting the steps to the waiting van
Strange indeed. The two were a perfect match! He had a disfigured face and she was blind. If only he had realized it, he would have been the happiest man
,Brother ASTRO
.I cannot get enough of your magic words
.You are just like mirage, impossible to catch
.Keep it up
If things do not turn as we wish, we
.should wish for them as they turn out
My magnificent dear
Wooow your words is beautiful
Just as say you May Allah bless you and reward
Your story 's Guitar
I remember my mother sacrificing every thing :)
Thanks for story darling
********
Like tow ship
A nice story
Astro , you are always a magnificent person
You are a very generous person
Thanks million darling
Dear brother ASTRO
The way you reply to each and every member shows how polite and courteous person you are.I'm thankful that you have the ability to please others
I liked the story and your interpretation too.I just have one more request.I do enjoy reading your explanations to the stories,they're more than enough.But you're spoiling us by giving the meaning hidden between lines without any effort by us.So I suggest that you write the story with no explanation.Give us time to figure out the idea ourselves and then the next time or day you're free to tell the meaning
In Arabic they say "من راقب الناس مات هماٌ" I certainly don't want to end up like that.I thought that by keeping my eyes around I'll be able to watch and monitor every bits and bites but I was mistaken .So I'm planning to replace it once I find a better picture
عفوا ......!!
حتى صمت العالم تبدد .......!!
إلا صمتي في كل حين يتجدد .......!!
Dear Instigator
Like the cool breeze of spring, you sway me with your gentle words. Thank you brother for everything
Dear Zahra
Your sweet kind words lift my pride like the deep blue sea carriying mighty vessels. To your gracious soul I shall forevermore be grateful
Dear Enigma
Each and every reply from you launches my spirit into orbit. The way you react to my words touches me deeply. It's no wonder I have to reply to you everytime you and the other members choose to adorne my post with your astounding replies. You are my terrestrial paradise
To you all, I dedicate this story
Werling
Werling Werner was witless. Without worrying whether wife Wilma was working, Werling wasted wampum willfully. Worthless Werling was workless. When Werling woke wondering what wife Wilma was wanting, we wondered why Werling wanted women. Werling was without wisdom. Woment want warmth. Wilma was wet. Werling Werner's weenie was worthless. Wilma went without. Woe was Werling
This time thanks to dear Enigma, I am not going to go into details. Enjoy
By the way Enigma, I think the picture you have is great. But of course, it can never be a match to your magnificent spirit
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة (ASTRO) ; 13-08-2005 الساعة 01:31 PM
Welcome my magnificent dear
Astro
Thank you
For this a story
Yesterday, I had missed your story
But now I pleasure I read your story
:The story and its details
I think his wife wanted a serious life
full of working to live in happiness
.and share everything in life
,Brother ASTRO
thanks for your touching words
.and you are most welcome
.Thanks for this story
.Keep it up
If things do not turn as we wish, we
.should wish for them as they turn out
Hello there
What happened
I thought we had an agreement to keep on writing stories till doomsday
عفوا ......!!
حتى صمت العالم تبدد .......!!
إلا صمتي في كل حين يتجدد .......!!
Dear friends Zahra, Instigator and Enigma
I am deeply sorry I had to keep you waiting for the past few days. I have been busy quite a bit. I also thought you might want to comment on the last story I've posted before we continue with another. But I guess I misunderstood. Nonetheless, I extend my sincere apology to you all. I promise you I shall be more attentive next time
Now, before we move on to the next story, I wonder if you have noticed that the last story was made up entirely of words that began with the letter "w". Facinating, don't you think so?i
To change the mood a little bit, I hope you will find this story amusing as I have
In The Garden
Standing there in the garden, she saw him running toward her.
"Tina! My flower! The love of my life!"
He'd said it at last
"Oh, Tom!"
"Tina, my flower!"
"Oh, Tom! I love you, too!"
Tom reacher her, knelt down, and quickly pushed her aside
"My flower! You were standing on my prize-winning rose!"
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة (ASTRO) ; 16-08-2005 الساعة 08:31 PM
O my goodness ......The poor one thought he loved her , how disappointing
I couldn't stop laughing,it's ironical
Sorry too for not commenting on the previous story.When I first read it I said to myself is ASTRO trying to drive us nuts by this 'W' letter
I had a different approach to it than the one given by Instigator,but I found his interpretation interesting
Thanks for this astonishing story
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة enigma ; 16-08-2005 الساعة 09:10 PM
عفوا ......!!
حتى صمت العالم تبدد .......!!
إلا صمتي في كل حين يتجدد .......!!
hahahahahahahahahah
.That was so funny to read
!!!!!!!How poor and disappointed she was
She was waiting that sweet words
.to hear them from her husband
It hurts to be placed
.in the same situation
,Brother ASTRO
thanks a lot for amusing us with
.such amazing short stories
.I am dying to read another one
.Keep it up
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Instigator ; 18-08-2005 الساعة 09:15 AM
If things do not turn as we wish, we
.should wish for them as they turn out
Dear Enigma and Instigator
Blessed is the soul that lives for another. Your words and comments are my umbilical cord; I could never exist without them. Thank you for being the patient audience in an empty theatre watching a lonely and sad actor
To your caring souls, I present the next story
Rendezvous
The phone rang
l "Hello," she whispered
l "Victoria, it's me. Meet me by the dock at midnight." l
l" I'll be there, sweetheart." l
l " And don't forget the bubbly, babe," he said
l "I won't, darling. I want you tonight." l
l "I can't wait!" he said, and hung up
She sighed, then smiled
l " I wonder who that was," she said
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة (ASTRO) ; 17-08-2005 الساعة 05:27 PM
My magnificent dear
Astro
You are a wonderful
All right , I am waiting your stories,
o.k., we apologized you : )
frankly , I like your story to make me to think
really I read 5 times and try to understand even I get used to understand very well : )
thanks darling
Oh,come on ASTRO.Get out of this sad mood.Why on earth would you be sad? Is it for us being the only audiance .
Who said we're the only ones reading your stories.I'm sure they are many those who read for you,but they're coming and leaving in silence with no word of thanks or appreciation
It makes me sad too sometimes that few members always keep participating with their replies and many many more just look and leave
But I think we should accept the human nature.People like to be entertained dislike being forced to respond
Those who reply to my posts are the ones counted for me( I consider them friends) and those who don't have all the
right not to participate
One more time I do thank you for your stories.I find joy in them, if you don't feel like posting them we'll understand and respect your wish
عفوا ......!!
حتى صمت العالم تبدد .......!!
إلا صمتي في كل حين يتجدد .......!!
.I think that he called the wrong number
She was lonely dreaming of her knight
coming with a black horse. She touched
the sky by listening to his voice then she
woke up from dreaming by sighing and
fell like a hadr rock on the ground by
.asking," I wonder who that was," she said
,Brother ASTRO
we should not give up hope even when
.we are neglected or being disappointed
Unfortunately, some members like
being hide not to comment on any
thread they read. Some feel shy to
make mistakes in puplic and some
have no time to press a single button
.of the keyboard
That was a matter I personaly suffered
from which was the relationship between
the number of replies and the number
.of readers of my own posted threads
Actually, that was a so disappionting matter
clipped my wings not to post any thread
.anymore
http://www.saudienglish.net/vb/showt...highlight=dead
Anyway, I am so proud of being one of
your audience to watch you acting. I cannot
.get enough of your spectacular films
I feel the spirit of life coming with your
.wonderful and magic thouches in English Club
.I really enjoy reading your amazing posts
Thanks a lot for amusing us and making us
.enjoy reading with such stories
Thanks a lot for your great efforts in
English club. It is my plesure and honor
.to have a one of kind kind member like you
.I wish you good luck and happiness forever
.Keep it up brother, please
.Best regards
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Instigator ; 19-08-2005 الساعة 04:27 AM
If things do not turn as we wish, we
.should wish for them as they turn out
Dear Zahra
Writers would die for a single reply from a tasteful reader like you. You always amaze me with your courageous and eager soul. The way you express yourself despit the difficulties you face in using the language make me bow in respect to your lofty spirit. Thank you my graceful lady for being the astonishing person you are
Dear Enigma
It is the nature of men to yearn for glamour and high esteem. This is a part of ourselves we can not hide from. I felt dizzy with ecstasy when I saw my posts pinned, a decision I shall always be thankful to for my dear brother Instigator. Yet, what I would feel more proud of is the simple act of sharing thoughts and feelings with me as you and the other wonderful brothers and sisters did with me. Words of my posts are like bridges that connect our souls. The reply I see from a friend is a sign that I am alive, felt, recognized and touched by him or her
The road we tread upon gets shorter when accompanied by caring souls
Dear Enigma
I would be lying if I said I don't look forward to your replies each and everyday. The way you think, write and express yourself is captivating. The moment I start reading your reply is a moment I cherich and value. The way you shook me out of my despair can only show the remarkable attitude you have for life. I guess being here longer than me has given you a perspective I still have time to gain. Thank you for standing by me in my time of need
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة (ASTRO) ; 18-08-2005 الساعة 10:36 AM
Dear Instigator
You have no idea how much your past experience has relieved me of my burden. A writer's delight is his reader's admiration and appreciation of what he writes. I have felt ashamed of my hasty disappointment when I have read your post. If a devoted writer such as yourself gets a few replies, who am I to ask for more? Thank you instigator for making me feel wanted and appreciated. I shall always be enslaved by your kindness
Dear Instigator, Zahrah and Enigma
To an audience that is worth the world to me, I dedicate this story
Gratitude
The street lights were a warm welcome from the oncoming chill of darkness
The park bench's curvature felt familiar under his tired old spine
The wool blanket from the salvation army was comfortable around his shoulders and the pair of shoes he'd found in the dumpster today fit perfectly
God, he thought, isnt life grand
How affecting this story is.In this huge, cold, harsh and rough world lies many sweet,soft,warm and tender things or realities
We're living a world of contradictions
Despite his conditions he still can see a beautiful aspect in life
I believe that it's all in our own minds,we can turn heaven into hell or the other way around
ASTRO Dear
You mentioned earlier that I have an attitude towards life.I do really have one but I just developed it recently that I should ,no matter what, give excuses to others
I liked Yasser's words and wanted to say that we all appreciate the posts sent by both of you
عفوا ......!!
حتى صمت العالم تبدد .......!!
إلا صمتي في كل حين يتجدد .......!!
Dear Enigma
Marvelous !!! I could never have said it better myself. Yes, despite every hostility we face, every burden we carry, every obstacle we encounter, we can always put a smile on our face and sing a happy song
Thank you for your wonderful insight
My magnificent dear
Astro
You are always agreat
Really, I am waiting your story
Every one story is better than other
I feel that you are a sensitive and I like your story
Don't forget ,we are with you
We will continue and eager to wait your story
Frankly, you must a happy actor because
You are a splendid with your words ,story, kind heart
We are always eager for your words remember that
Thank you darling for your efforts
I wish from Allah successful and property
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة (ASTRO)
,Brother ASTRO
.thanks a lot for reciprocation the same feeling
I feel so proud of having a kind and a humble
brother like you. You may not know how happy
.I am when reading your touching and lovely words
.Thanks again
If things do not turn as we wish, we
.should wish for them as they turn out
,Sister enigmaالمشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة enigma
I am speechless and my words are inadequate
.to thank you for you sweet and encouraging words
.I appreciate it
Best of luck
If things do not turn as we wish, we
.should wish for them as they turn out
,What a poor life he has!!! I feel so sorry
sad and pity for this lonely man lost going
.nowhere and walking through darkness
Living in such life full of sorrow leads to
hopeless feelings. No matter how people
live, they should struggle to survive. This
way of so simple life is a good example to
know that there are no impossible ways to
remain survive. Life itself is a mystery to
figure it out, because it is always with and
against us at the same time. Through
difficult and hard circumstances that poor
and simple man keeps surviving to be alive
by looking for shining and pleasing aspects
in grant life. Life always keeps going on in
.mysterous ways we have pass through
,Brother ASTRO
.I really appreciate your great efforts with us
Thanks a lot for entertaing us with such
spectacular shrot stories including and
.discussing life experience
.Keep it up, brother
Best regards
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Instigator ; 21-08-2005 الساعة 07:40 AM
If things do not turn as we wish, we
.should wish for them as they turn out
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