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  1. #51
    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    it's my turn looooooool

    aussie
    I know, I have a lot of mistakes
    and really I would like if there anyone who can always correct them for me
    because I am sure it's the fast way to learn any language

    so, join us
    and let us learn from each other

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    lol okay now stop that chat and lets start a new story

    a girl lost her way to her family when they were walking in the park of the city in London,,she kept walking untill she reached the main road . And decided to go to the hotel so she manged to stop a taxi and asked him to drive her to the hotel.

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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    when she looked at her wallet
    she didn't find the card of her hotel
    she forgot its name
    ooh my God, what should I do..she said
    the taxi driver observed her condition that she was too confused and fead
    he offered his service on her and she asked him to took her to the police office
    she didn't know with who she sat
    he was a big murderer

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    he knew that she is one rich lady from the way she wear & talk. He thought he can steal her money and just kill her.

    He was a crazy killer who love to see the

    blood

    and to see his victim suffering, that poor girl didnt realize that and just wanted to find her family and go to the police station.

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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    she saw the police office at the corner
    and felt happy..
    now I can meet my family.. she said
    she was smile till she observed that
    the driver left that office behind him..!
    at first, she told him,,the office is there
    so, you have to return
    ,but the man ignored her and continued his way
    hello, are you deaf.. she said
    also, there is no answer
    she saw his foxy smile
    asked him to stop immediately or she will scream ,, but he didn't
    and now she knew that she is in trouble

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    She was thinking to jump off the taxi but she was so afraid to hurt herself. .
    So the best move have to be when he stop for the traffic light.
    When he did she took her perfume bottle and broke his head with it ,and gave him three hits with her heels .
    He was screeming from the pain and freezed so she opened the door and ran away till she entered a coffeshop and phoned 911.


    End of the story or you wanna add something Neverland?

  7. #57
    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    No Addition sister
    how it was an awful day
    ^^

    the new story

    "
    There was a poor widow woman who has 7 children
    and lives in a little home
    worked in a market under an evil man
    who knew how much she need money

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    good for us
    We should start thinking of publishing our own book lol
    What do you think?


    he was wicked man he wanted her farm in any possible way ,she refused because that farm was all what she own. And that farm is their house so she can never put it for sale.

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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    looooooooooooool

    I'm thinking seriously about that



    In the middle of the month her salary finished.
    She thought to offer her farm for sale
    while she was looking for "Instrument farm ownership" she found that her husband owns a shopping mall !!
    She screamed couldn't believe it and thought it was dream !!


    Finally, happy ending ^^


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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية مدردش
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    Your story reminded me of those Mexican Balmlesslat
    Where the endless

    I have no involvement
    Read only
    Thanks

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    nah I didn't like that
    She should suffer more lol
    I mean she may think later to sell it but for her luck the lottery paper she bought matched the winning numbers and that mean she won 1000,000 dollars from the lottery show.

    She renew her house, pay her bills and opened her own grocery business.

    That is more =alive= story
    What do you think Neverland?


    مدردش
    Hey I didn't get what u meant
    But i think u didnt like our stories lol

    You better share us with ur comments & stories than just READING :P

  12. #62
    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    I think my ending is much better
    loooooooooooool

    so, let's start one completely new story
    ;)

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    No way mine is cooler lol

    Okay new story


    A muslim man wanted to marry a christian girl he met at university but his parents refused that.

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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    back

    "

    the first meeting was in a family's home, whom he lived with
    she was them friend,, visits them usually
    he saw her once, twice, and more
    fall in love with her
    at first, his goal was study and no thing else
    but then everything changed

    what was really hard is, when he remembered his cousin (Fiancee )
    who's trust him and waiting him to complete his education, comeback then get married

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    welcome back ^_^




    so he was really sad what to do

    shall he follow his heart and marry the Christian girl

    or follow the reason and marry his cousin!!!


    that was difficult decision to make

    he went to the near by masjed and prayed Estikharah
    when he went home he slept and had a dream that told him what to do

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    In his dream, he saw a big black snake creeping around him in a suspicious way. As the snake tried to get close to him, it was driven away by an old man.So, the man woke up and went to ...........

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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    in his dream he saw himself walked alone in middle of street
    the weather was dark, cold, and scary
    Suddenly , he arrived at two ways and has to choose one
    he was doubtful and unsure, which one is more safe..!?

    when he being so nearby from them
    he heard strange voice
    which laugh once and cry in another

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    after those two dreams lol

    He woke up in tears
    And then he prayed

    He was thinking what that dreams meant so in the morning he went to the Shaikh and told him about what he went through.

    The Shaikh adviced him to listen to his parents and Allah will gauid him to the right path

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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    looool
    he took their parents advice seriously
    and asked Allah for help him to forget that girl

    once he was walked on street
    then
    he saw his girl with another gulf boy
    ooops it's unbelievable.. he said

    then he knew that, his parents was right
    so, now he done his education
    came back to his country
    get married from his cousin
    and thanked Allah for guide him to the correct way
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة "Neverland" ; 15-08-2009 الساعة 11:40 PM

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    great happy ending ^__^

    thanks Neverland bless you

    yall whos next??

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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    It's me
    ^^


    The new story is about a talent boy who has a beautiful voice and depressed people around him

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    welcome my partner :D

    that boy got magical voice ,people around him always ask him to sing and when he do they start crying .
    His voice is mixed with a sad tone and that what he hate most about himself.

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    This boy always wake up at the midnight and intonation the Quran with a devout voice then their parents waked up trying to hear that wonderful voice.They think the voice come from the neighbors house

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    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    hiiii buddies

    one day, he woke up with out voice
    tried hard to talk and scream
    but with no useful


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    that was a disaster because tommorow is the day for his school play in the stage and he is the hero.

    His parents took him to the hospital and the doctor told them that every thing is all right and he can't see any physical problem!

    The boy wrote to his mom that yesterday when he was in the stage practicing his mate said u got great voice i wish i can have it ,and that was an evil eye == lol

    So the next day the boy asked his friend to say Masha Allah.
    When he did ,his voice came back.
    It was miracle but subhan Allah happend :D


    good ending?

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