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الموضوع: Lets Write A story All of Us

  1. #76
    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    رد: Lets Write A story All of Us

    yes
    ^^
    but I have a quastion
    how he told him to say masha Allah
    looool

    :

    the next story
    ??

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    lol I really don't know
    Okay next story



    its a story about a young man who love to surf the internet and chat with other people to know new languages and cultures.

  3. #78
    انجليزي جديد الصورة الرمزية "Neverland"
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    which is the reason of faired him from his school
    he spent a lot of time on the internet
    slept late
    his mom adviced him many times to organize his life but he didn't
    so, she thought of a punishment

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    she thought of taking his computer but then she had a good idea.

    She sent her son to the village were his grandparents live there. That must give him a good lesson

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    In his way there, he bought a mobily connect in order not to miss his friends.So, when he met his grandparents, he found out that they were very fond of the internet since they did not have any. They gathered around him asking him to show them the plastic surgery in the youtube. Because his grandma wanted to get rid of the wrinkles and play football with kids. And his grandpa wanted to take an address of a Russian girl so as to marry her. The boy thought a little and .....................
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Lancaster ; 26-08-2009 الساعة 06:00 AM


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    lol
    the boy couldnt believe what his grandpa and grandma are saying

    He said what the hell u r oldies talking about!?! O_o

    They laughed and said it was a joke :)


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    When the boy fell asleep, his grandma took his laptop and gave it to her mice. "Hide it in the forest, please" said the grandma. She brought a plastic tyre and lit a fire. "Oh, little boy. Wake up. look at your laptop" cried the grandma. The boy woke up and spilled water on the fire. Unfortunately, He could not save anything. Then, he checked the fire place and found a black plastic molten stuff. He cried a little and phoned his parents. ............................................


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    he was beging and just want to leave the village ,but his mom told him that they are very busy and can't be there but in the weekend.

    The boy couldnt bear it and went to down the town to take a walk.

    While he was walking he passed by beautiful farms and very nice places ,he even forgot that he is sad because of that laptop .

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    As he was there, He saw a butterfly. He followed the butterfly trying to catch it. After that, he heard something that was familiar to him.


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    it was sound of water

    He walked untill he reached a wonderful lake and there he found a young boy fishing.

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    "Morning"
    said the boy. The young boy did not reply. "Why are you sitting alone" said the boy. He received no reply. Then, he came close to him . When he reached the young boy, he was tremble. The boy has no face. .So, the boy ran as much as he could. As he was running, he fell in a trap and became unconscious


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    when he woke up he found himself at his grandma house ,he has fever & his mother next to his bed taking care of him.

    He said what happend , a voice came from the step of the door and the same boy appeared.

    You fell and I carried you here, the boy said.

    Thanks . . .the mother replied and then she turnd to her son and said: Look this boy is my nephew his name is Jamal ,his parents died in a car accident ,his face wasnt like that but he had sergery that day. .he was in the car too.

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    Lol
    What I mean is that the boy is a sprite. According to our maid , She said that she saw a lady with long hair and when she turned she had no face. Only hair with an empty face.

    ?Have you got it.

    Anyway, I'll complete the stoy later .And now I have to go to make our Suhur
    Bye^_^


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    I heard about that also but I didnt want to write a scary story lol

    Okay huny
    Take care

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    Then, Jamal disappeared and his ma and grandma, too. So, the boy recovered his conscious. He was only alone in a dark scary cave. . . He felt that his clothes are wet. He was barely able to stand. Then, he tried to walk but he fell again. He was so tired. "Heeeelp. Heeeeelp". He cried. Then, he heard a scary laugh and a scream. So

    ..........................................





    Whenever you try to kill the supernatural element in the story, I will say: "IT WAS JUST A DREAM" LOL
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Lancaster ; 28-08-2009 الساعة 06:57 AM


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    lol
    Thats mean our hero was dreaming all the time

    He learnt to obay his mother and just become a good student again :)

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    I'm out.


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    O_o
    Okay miss

    Next member start new story

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    Hello everyone,
    ___________________________


    "No one knows"
    It was very hot place to live, but he didn't care about the weather. He just wanted to save the beautiful life he had. When he was out, which house where he lived the loudly voice was happened.
    "My husband our house is burning right now! Hurry …"
    his wife said

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    انجليزي رائع الصورة الرمزية eastrenrose
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    there is a boy who live with his father he has no friends .he spent alot of time on his computer.even he didnot talk to his father.his father is always busy at work .they just met at breakfast meal .the internet was his world.

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