Lets Write A story All of Us

[M.o_o.N]

Hey Friends :D

Well , I didn't see a similar topic so I'm going to be the first :P

Its a game were we can practise our English

Each member complete the story of the other member ,short and nice . Then after ten or so replies we finish one story & start another one. .



Good?




Yala I will start :D


A beautiful girl was walking in the street going home after school , she was hungry and thought. .let me pass by the supermarket and get strawberry cake. ..

["Neverland"]

How is it a wonderful idea


:

When the girl arrived, she intered the supermarket. Looked for the strawberry cake and finally she found it , but what happened is, when she was going to pay for it, she didn't find her wallet, It's stolen

[M.o_o.N]

when she found out that she got no money she remembered that her mom's Mastercard~Visa~ was in her wallet.
Tried to reach her mobile and for her bad luck it was also stolen o_O"

["Neverland"]

At a moment she thought about die
but then she decided to tell her mother about what happened

when she arrived home, she tried to write for her mom instead of tell her the truth face to face
?!..but when she opened her bag to take a paper she found that a different notebooks
it was her friend bag

[M.o_o.N]

^_^
She was about to put that notebook again in the bag but she got really strange and strong feelings. .

"Uh i need to read this notebook ,i know my friend may hate me for that" she said.

["Neverland"]

ups she got excelent grades which is opposite to what she said to me
and there.. there is a picture.. he's my boyfriend..!

[M.o_o.N]

the girl is pissed off now , she didn't return the notebook she just through it away.
And when her mom came back home ,the girl didn't lie & told her the trueth. .the mom said: Well sweety. .My visa with me . .and You don't take ur mobile with u to school. .
The girl smiled: Thats make a sense. .I thought I lost them. . .and what about my wallet?
Your friend just called & told me that u & her exchanged the bags. .didn't? The mother said. .

The girl replied: We did mama , we did. .

[Homie]

now the girl's so happy and she has her wallet , mobile and nothin is missing



yeaah happy ending

let's make up new one :)

cause if we go on with this one is gonna be boring


who's gonna start it

:)

["Neverland"]

Mee


There was an old man who lives a lone in a big castle. He was too rich and didn't have any heir. Now, he is sick and worrys about his fortune.

[M.o_o.N]

the old man felt so lonely & that he is dying, he needed some one to take care of him & prepare food.
He hired a young girl as a servant to clean ,cook and to help him.

[No One Else]

The servant didn't treat him well ,so he decided to fire her .. at this moment,she got angry and bushed him . he died immediately . oh my god ' she said . what hill I've did

[Lancaster]

She cried a little. Then, she pulled him and threw him into the well. She took her bag trying to escape. Unfortunately, when she opened the door,she was met by a man. He asked her about the old man. She was so upset and could not give him an answer
The man pulled his weapon and cried : " Where is the old man?

[Homie]

she didn't answer she kept silence
so the man pulled the trigger and got ready to shoot her, then someone cried WAIT don't shoot, it was the old man he didn't die , he acted like nothing happened , the girl didn't understand why the old man did that ?
why didn't he say anything ?
at the night after the another man left, the girl came to the old man
and start crying
the old man hugged her and said it's okay it's okay
i forgive you , she pulled a knife
and looked at the old man's eyes and said i'm crying because i couldn't do anything right in my life but now i'll finish the job and i'll never missed up again

[No One Else]

wise old man ^^


The nixt story is about a clever child
He is just 5 years old
but he used his intelligent to destroy others life

[Lancaster]

I think the previous story hasn't finished yet. Am I right?
She pulled a knife but what did she do with it
Did she commit suicide or kill that old man?

[MaFia]

The previous story is still unfinished.

[M.o_o.N]

lol you people r fun , i couldnt stop laughing

I can tell u like herror movies
So let me finish the story


The girl wanted to kill him she ran toward him but suddenly she fell in her face . . .the knife directly entered her body.
The oldman couldn't do anything and he was standing there like a wall. .that was God punishment , you are a criminal, the oldman said. .
In his well ,he gave all his wealth to the orphans and poor kids =)
2nd story done
CLAPS yuy ^__^

Next story: the smart 5years old kid . .
Go a head friends yalla :D

[keifee1212]

ماشاء الله تبارك الله

الكتاب كثر وفيهم مبدعين بصراحة

مع وجود بعض الأخطاء

اعتقد المستوى هنا جامعي والله أعلم

وبصراحة نفسي اصير اكتب مثلكم

استمروا :) والله يوفقكم

[knight m]

once there was a party ,there were a lot of quests.the child went to the kitchen ,he put a lot of salt in quests' dishes

[M.o_o.N]

hey brother :D
I know you can write and complete a story
Please try ^_^
Good luck

["Neverland"]

but because of his bad luck, that day was his birthday
Actually they surprised him and he forgot that
They asked him to wish something after that put out the candles then eat first

["Neverland"]

keifee1212

Be sure that all of us started from the zero
so, as much you try as much you learn

[keifee1212]

keifee1212

Be sure that all of us started from the zero
so, as much you try as much you learn
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it's not possible to say the zero

zero is enough without the

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thanks for advising me

[M.o_o.N]

The kid's wish was to correct his mistake :P
When the food was served , for his luck that choco salty cake wasnt in the table. .
He asked his mom, where is dat cake ma?
She said: Uh dear ,I throw it away. .just forget it . . Its my fault I added salt instead of suger.
He kissed his mom saying I'm sorry . .

[BloumagrieT]

Renoa

That's a good idea

We've tried it once but the topic was dead

but it's ok to try again

I'll pass by again and try to add something

Thanks sister