~*~My Soul~*~

[الغاليه]

This is a poem that I wrote… not very good but I hope u like it

My soul behold…can I take you to the moon
To create a new season of love and glamour

I'll reach the sun and bring it down
To make your days forever shine

The velvet touch of your hand
Turns my world into a dance

There is no one around me
When you are close to me

I look into your eyes…I see a light
That takes my heart in a joyful ride

Roses blossom in my dreams
'cause you live inside of me

I love you deeply…I love you so
I wish you know that before I go
And my voice is heard no more

[Abo Lama]

الغالية

I'll reach the sun and bring it down
To make your days forever shine

our star shines wherever we go

keep it on my sister plz

[الغاليه]

dear brother

am so honoured that u were the first 2 read my humble words

thanx a lot 4 ur sweet complements

[الهمة العالية]

you are realy wonderful
you are amazing
go ahead show us
how high are you darling

[الغاليه]

I can't thank you enough for your kind words

they mean a lot 2 me

am so pleased my dear sweet friend

[sokara]

الغاليه
htanx for sharing us

your nice word

[الغاليه]

thank you for your sweet comment

God bless you

[DR AHLAIN]

I love you deeply…I love you so
I wish you know that before I go
And my voice is heard no more

Fantastic...Fantastic....

Al-Ghaliah

Very nice thing to have such writers as You

Everyday you suprise us with wonderful works

I discovered that you are sensitive in addition to your sense of humor


YOU ENCOURAGE US TO WAIT YOUR NEXT WORK

SO PLEASE HURRY UP...WE ARE WAITIG

[الغاليه]

sooooo big words dear DR;AHLAIN

I feel embarrassed while reading your sweet encouragement

I hope I don't dissappoint you

thanx soooooooooooooo much

[فاتح القدس]

That's

brilliant

&

right on the button

[الغاليه]

I'm speachless

Fateh Al-Qouds...to see your comment is a pleasure for me

thanx soooo much for it

[اسيــ حبه ــرة]

that's wounderful

Really nice to see you here

So lovely words .. Thanks alot

Don't deprive us from your presence

Thanks aloooooooot .. Keep posting such as this

[الغاليه]

so pleased that u liked it

I hope I don't dissappoint u

thanx 4 ur wonderful words

[Instigator]

,Dear Alghalyah
your words make me feel alive
.to survive and to touch the sky

.Thanks a lot for sharing it with us
.Keep it up

[الغاليه]

welcome back dear brother

don't you ever leave us :D

thanx 4 your kind words

[JuSt Me]

WoW!
well-spoken words sis,
keep on in this mood,
you are an awesome poet.
It is rocking, even walls will broke.

[الغاليه]

oh my God!!...I can't believe that u liked it that much

your words mean a lot 2 me

thanks Just Me 4 your sweet comment

although I don't think I deserve it :D

[Userper]

I have noticed the shape of the
of the text which wellknown
poets do to make a relation
between the meaning and the
form which is called framal style.
You said :
I wish you know that before I go
And my voice is heard no more
but you didn't tell what you want us to know.

[الغاليه]

I love you deeply…I love you so
I wish you know that before I go
And my voice is heard no more

it's obvious...

what I want him 2 know is that I love him

thanx a lot 4 commenting

[JuSt Me]

Why not deserve Al-Ghaliah?
It has a sweet taste. :rolleyes:

[الغاليه]

Why not deserve Al-Ghaliah?
It has a sweet taste. :rolleyes:

thanx a million time 4 ur encouragement

God bless u

[SuPeRLaRk]

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I'll reach the sun and bring it down
To make your days forever shine

REALY IT VERY NICE POEM
PLS KEEP ON & SHARE US WITH UR NICE POEM[/center]

[الغاليه]

glad u liked it

thank u 4 passing and 4 ur sweet complemint

[زهرة وفى]

thanks my sister

you are great
and

incredible

May Allah bless you

keep on

[الغاليه]

YOU are the GREAT dear

am sooo pleased that u passed and read it

and more pleased that u liked it

thank u sooo much