بليز مسساعده لو تكرمتوا

[دانــــة srk]

السسسلام عليكم ورحمة الله

مسائكم ورد وسرور .. وفرح ماله آخر

بصراحه حبيتكم تساعدوني في موضوع انشائي انا كتبته وابتأكد من صحته من ناحية القواعد والضمائر وكذا .. ياليت اذا تقدرو تسساعدوني .. ولكم جزيل الشششكر..

The Giving

when you give someone your hands ther realy need it to git through from the dark. when you help someone to pass his problems. when you give a lifeline which save him from all his pains. when you see the glimmer of light back to his life again.
that is the giving
now is even more a reason to give them ever before , and helps those who are feeling the life is be so difficult . we can be part of miracle just if we collective effort . if we all work together it takes very little to make a big difference the people who are happiest those who try to make people around them happy
the giving is the way of happiness

الف شكر لكم

[ريما الحسين]

اهلين اخت دانه

السبيلينق عندك متأكده انه صحيح

لكن يبي لك تراجعين القواعد لأني مادققت بالقواعد والضمائر صراحه

ماشالله عليك عندك قدره ع الكتابه

keep it up

بالتوفيـــــــــــق

[Petunia]

وعليكم السلام و رحمه الله و بركاته

موضعك جميل:)

هذا التعديل

The Giving

when you give someone your hands because he realy needs you to

get him out of the darkness. when you help someone to pass or

overcome his problems. when you give a lifeline which saves him

from all his pains. when you see the glimmer light coming back to his life again
.
that is called the giving

now there is reason to give them your help , and help those who are

feeling that their life has become so difficult . we would be parts

of a miracle if we just have collected hard efforts . if we all worked

together, it would make a big difference because that people who

are feel happy would make people around them feel happy too
.
so the giving is considered as a way of the happiness