Yes
you're going to be one, rather than two
one day
thnx
What do you have in mind ?
Why do you keep it inside ?
Your love words are unsaid
It's only me who did
My dear , make it clear
I want to stop my fear
Are you meant to be with me ?
The dream I always see
Are your emotions true
I really want to know
Do I have a place in your heart ?
Or shall we , one day part
Are we , as you said , one
Or we are rather two
Just let me know or let me go
You said yes and said no
You did yes and did no
You let my worries grow
I know nothing my dear
I only shed my tear
Be frank with me , love
Tell me yes or tell me no
I want to Know
I want to Know
By
Sirhasan
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
Yes
you're going to be one, rather than two
one day
thnx
Dear muhamedr
You are a amart guy indeed
Thanks so much for your positive answer
I really appreciate your comment
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
Sooooo emotional
and touchy
Your words are very nice
Keep it up
:)
سبحان الله وبحمده
سبحان الله العظيم
What do you have in mind ?
Why do you keep it inside
Do I have a place in your heart ?
Or shall we , one day part
Just let me know or let me go
You said yes and said no
You let my worries grow
I know nothing my dear
I only shed my tear
Tell me yes or tell me no
I want to Know
I want to Know
By
Sirhasan
Thanks
May Allah Blesssssssssssssss Your Heart
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة S..S ; 30-01-2010 الساعة 12:12 AM
See my picture I am a hero
http://en.tackfilm.se/?id=1270748474625RA49
A mixture of anger,sadness and
pain will cause
deeeeeeeeeep thinking
with
loooooooong silence
*** So..Sad***
Anfas Oman - S..S
Thanks so much
for your nice
delicate
inspirational
comments
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
OMG
I really want to know
Do I have a place in your heart ?
Or shall we , one day part
Are we , as you said , one
Or we are rather two
Just let me know or let me go
very touching words
yeah, just let me know or let me go
Masha' Allah
Sirhasan
what a remarkable and magnificent poem
keep it up please
لأن
( الله ربي ) سأبحر في أُمنياتي ..
سأزيدُ رغباتي !
سَأطمع في دُعائي أكثر
..
لأن الله رَبي !..
سأطرُق البابَ وإن طال الفَتح
`سأنطَرِحُ على الأعتاب
وإن امتدّ الزمان ،
فحتماً ولابُد ;
سأبكي فرحاً يوماً من دَهشتي بالعطاء
Dear lost lady
Your remarks are always inspiring
Thank you for the great stock of nice
and encouraging words that you have
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
sirhasan
Emotional lines indeed ! Thanks brother .
you are realy gifted
I have enjoyed reading it
keep up the good work
Thanks to all for their encouragement and support
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
sir hassan i really liked your touchy emotional poem
i love it
keep up the good work
waiting for more
That is touching..YES it is
sirhasan
Thanks for shring us ...waiting for more
:)
thanks
your words are very nice
right or left this place is the best
Thanks To All For Their Encouraging Comments
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
Your words are very nice
Keep it up
Wish you the best brother
I enjoyed reading your poem , wallah I can't imagin there in KSA such a great English poets like you Masha Allah ^^
Keep writing dear
Dear Renoa , even in your replies you are special
This is the best reply I ever read
May Allah reward you the best
For your back up
For You I say
Let me say thank you for the gift
And more thanks for the thought
The greatest thing I can thank you for
is all the joy you’ve brought.
Thanks Soooo Much
.
The candle has blown out , extinguished
and darkness shrouded the whole place
That `s truly amazing . you should send it to the american singer [josh groban ]He `s amazing too & when you do that ,it `ll become HIT NO.1...........................aND WE ARE WAITING
Thanx sirhasan
Really u hv emotional sense
U hv an ability to use words in their correct place
U r great poet
wow
i don't have any word to say
except masha'allah
we r proud so proud ov you
keep it up and good luck
مهـرة الـروح
I'm new here I have read a number of your posts and I was surprised it's an amazing
wow
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