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    22 I*******A Love Story By Sirhasan******I



    A Sad Love Story





    She and I had been together for a long time , but something that none of us knew made us apart . I did not see her for a whole week and I really began to go mad . She disappeared Suddenly . I asked about
    her everywhere but got no clue .I phoned her mobile hundreds of times but she did not reply .
    This went on for a month . A complete month of agony and despair .
    During this month my whole life deteriorated . Things changed from bad to worse . My life became very gloomy. The days were depressing and the nights were fearful nightmares . I really was afraid of losing her .
    I was not ready to forgo the only thing that made life bearable and worth living . Thus ,
    I kept aloof from my friends and relatives .I turned into a lonesome man who kept himself to himself
    I did not mixed with my friends . I rarely go out of my home . I just spent hours and hours with
    her pictures talking to them . The more I remember our intimate times together , the more I cry .I cry and cry and cry .Finally , I collapsed and then knew nothing . The next morning I wake up very tired and another depressing day begins .
    My friends began to feel anxious for me . They tried their best to take me out of this . Whenever they went to a café , a restaurant or a park , they take me with them .They tried to amuse me and made me laugh but I was dying from inside . They did all this to help me get over my love problem .
    After three months , I gathered up my courage and tried to lead the normal life that everybody enjoyed
    I pretended that I did not care anymore but I did . I pretended that I forgot her but I did not .Something in my heart still reminded me of her . I pretended and pretended but nothing was true .
    Then one day , the truth came out .It was Thursday , and I Will never forget it as long as I lived .As I
    entered the nearest shopping mall , I bumped into someone who was carrying a plastic bags full of items . May I was day dreaming of her , who knows .I felt embarrassed and began to clear the mess
    I made . I began to collect the items from the floor . As I raised my eyes to say sorry , I saw her for the first time .I stood still . I did not believe my eyes . Was it real ? Was it a dream that came true ?
    Here she is , as beautiful as she always was .Her lovely face and glimmering eyes that once captivated me .I was greeted with a huge smile . My feelings were a mixture of fear , astonishment , disbelief and happiness . The moment I saw tears falling from her eyes , my legs gave way and I fell to the ground .
    I stretched both my arms and cried like a baby and said " Hello , My Love "
    The End
    I hope You like it – My regards to all .
    Note :
    This story raises many questions which I preferred not to answer
    I Kept the story open – ended to your imagination to fly high and complete it
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    See my picture I am a hero

    http://en.tackfilm.se/?id=1270748474625RA49

    A mixture of anger,sadness and
    pain will cause
    deeeeeeeeeep thinking
    with
    loooooooong silence
    *** So..Sad***

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    WOOOW
    VERY WONDERFULL STORY
    thanks
    قال الشيخ ابن باز - رحمه الله تعالى -

    (الحياة في سبيل الله أصعب من الموت في سبيله)

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    you have a nice way
    in writing story
    you keep the reader continue
    untill he or she finishes the stroy

    thank you for sharing us
    we are waiting for your new topics

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة dimples مشاهدة المشاركة
    wooow
    very wonderfull story
    thanks

    dimples

    many thanks to you for passing and commenting nicely

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rose rani مشاهدة المشاركة
    you have a nice way
    in writing story
    you keep the reader continue
    untill he or she finishes the stroy

    thank you for sharing us
    we are waiting for your new topics

    I thank you deeply for your nice words

    May Allah bless you

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    Thats a sad LOVE story
    You break our hearts by telling us this one >>no TEARS loolz
    Sirhasan
    Masha ' Allah
    Very talented person
    keep it up please
    May Allah keep You a way from sadness

    لأن
    ( الله ربي ) سأبحر في أُمنياتي ..
    سأزيدُ رغباتي !
    سَأطمع في دُعائي أكثر
    ..
    لأن الله رَبي !..
    سأطرُق البابَ وإن طال الفَتح
    `سأنطَرِحُ على الأعتاب
    وإن امتدّ الزمان ،
    فحتماً ولابُد ;
    سأبكي فرحاً يوماً من دَهشتي بالعطاء

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    lost lady

    Thanks for nice words

    May Allah bless You

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    sirhasan

    What a lovely story you wrote which is full of feelings
    I was imagining it as it happened in front of me
    I prefer not to complete it because it has a suitable end
    Well done brother and keep going




    أم عبدالعزيز

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    it touches my heart and I hope you have bright future in writing stories
    Thank u
    Dear
    sirhasan

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    thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks alot
    you are very Gifted
    right or left this place is the best

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    Sea breeze

    Nanosh

    Asoma



    Many thanks for your passing

    And commenting so nicely

    .

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    I hope other members like it

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    it's a great story bother thanks soo much

    ok I wish if i can end it with a happy end but because of your topic is " A sad love story"

    so I'll end it with a very sad end if you don't mind


    don't be depressed all loooooooool


    ^
    ^
    ^

    After a while we sat together and I asked her a rain of questions...where were you, what happened, why did you answer my messages and calls…but she stopped me and said with dropping tears and said: stop it everything has finished between us we won't be together any more" what..? I replied….she stayed silent looking down>>>I continued...ba ba but why? What happened...why are you saying that? I asked…because I got married…she replied…yes he is a rich man who my father likes and there is no chance that we would be together again…she said…before finishing her speech I lost my consciousness ..Finally after that moment I didn't see her ever trying to forget everything but how, can anyone help me please?
    .


    .


    Here and there


    .


    .

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    Dear Pink Pen

    What a great writer you are . Masha Allah You have prolific imagination

    I liked your way of writing so much . Please keep on writing and read a lot

    You are and will be a distiguished writer indeed , so carry on



    .

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    very nice story
    I like it
    thanks alot

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    I hope others find it touching too

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    I like ur writings
    U r gifted

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة BRIGHTFUL STAR مشاهدة المشاركة
    I like ur writings
    U r gifted
    Thanks So Much For Your Compliment Dear

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    You are endowed writer , poet and what else?

    Masha Allah keep up the good work .

    Have a blessed day.
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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Renoa مشاهدة المشاركة
    You are endowed writer , poem and what else?

    Masha Allah keep up the good work .

    Have a blessed day.

    Dear Renoa , Many Thanks To U 4 UR Generous Remark

    May Allah Bless U

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    Then you discovered that it wasn't she !0
    After a while; you waked up with yourself falling down ur bed !!0

    Will this suit to be a good end ??0

    Alot of thanks,, great work and pls, accept my passing ...0

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة احســـــاس مشاهدة المشاركة
    Then you discovered that it wasn't she !0
    After a while; you waked up with yourself falling down ur bed !!0

    Will this suit to be a good end ??0

    Alot of thanks,, great work and pls, accept my passing ...0
    Thanks a lot Ihsas for your creativity and gentle passing

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    thanks a looooooooot it's really a touching story
    you have a wonderful way of writing stories & poems

    you can only go as far as you puch

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة جوهر مشاهدة المشاركة
    thanks a looooooooot it's really a touching story
    you have a wonderful way of writing stories & poems

    Thanks a lot for your passing and comment

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