it's wounderful words
thanks alot
What are these promises mean to you ?
Are they vows or chains?
Too much promises , you keep no one
As the time go , the fall comes
lose all the leaves ,one after one
what a burden you were carrying ?
And what a fantasy?, i was living
I should believe that no love last
i should believe my heart lost
look at the mirror,what can you see?
a man without features means none
ears are deaf from all these fake
the mask is off , i see the bald face
Two hearts in one ,gathering in one promise
to live togather ,even after death ,
you ll be a life in every memory
i ll be there in your heart in every beat
written by eastrenrose
I hope you like it . iam waiting your comments
it's wounderful words
thanks alot
Hello Miss poet :)
Very nice , I like the rhym /n/ , you'v done a wonderful job
The poem carries lots of doubts though!
Keep writing huny , thank you for sharing it with us.
^.^
it so nice
eastrenrose
As a biginning it's good so you should keep reading more and more
Concerning the content conveyed I just want to say something
that life doesn't stop cause someone keeps breaking promises
We have to trust those who deserve only
Thank you for sharing
Thanks for all who read my poem and give me helpful advices
And i promise you to take it
hii its nice keep on going
Thanks for your comments
it is a good poem i like it toooooooooo much
thanks
you can only go as far as you puch
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