الى كل من يتقن فن اللغة الإنجليزية

[الفتى الغامض]

السلام عليكم ....


كتبت موضوع انشاء ,, بس يا ريت انكم تساعدوني ... موضوعي الإنشاء باللغة الإنكليزية , وأنا ما بعرف شو الأخطاء في القواعد ... مشان هيك أنا جبتلكم الموضوع وكتبت على الموقع لعل وعسى أنه حدا يساعدني ويبين لي قدر المستطاع أين أخطائي في الموضوع ...


أبدأ بسم الله ....








the life been the past and today



when was the life most commfortable? in the past or in today ? .

A lot of time , was my grand dad narrate me how the life was in the past , i was very agape for the life them in he past , because it today it is very commfortable.

the most thing plair me ! when he tell me : and we was travel on the mule . when i say in my self : they was subsist in hard sustenance in the past , but in today , we compose abuty car for travel to any place wether nearby or far .
real the life today it is very commfortable than the life in the past .

[هير اي آم]

Life between today and yesterday
Iam wondering!! When life was more comfortable ? in the present or in the past ?
My grand father was telling me how life in the past was looked like?
I was verey amaized about the life style in the past . I felt that there is no comparision between them . The most thing which surprized me , when he told me that the were travelling on the mule .In that moment ,I said to my self " how hard they lived?
But today we live differentally .We have the most effecient cars ever to help us to travel any where any how.Life today is absolutly wonderful.


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