my tears

[eastrenrose]

I cannot hold my tears anymore
Hide them to show, I am not weak
Who said my tears are my weakness?
All the power in these salty drops
A weapon can steal the sympathy
From cruel hearts
Foul the soft one
Oh my tears, you free
All the bridges built down
Go to your way where you belong
My sorrow, dry land, was waiting too long
Shall m y tears kill my pain ?
Shall my glance come back again?
Crying tonight in the silent night
Reveal the secret of my cruel face

writen by Eastrenrose

[nosa]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

nice poem darling
high and moral feeling
we wait more from your sweety sharing
best regards

[ACME]

Wonderful lines indeed . They are full of feelings and sentiments .
Tears are what happens when it rains deeply hard and we can not
hold that rain any longer . Best wishes for your forthcoming poems


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[dolphy]

[rose rani]

wow wonderful lines
I have enjoyed reading them

A weapon can steal the sympathy

From cruel hearts

these two lines are really amazing
keep up the good work

[eastrenrose]

thanks for encourge me and for these nice comments
nosa-sirhasan-dolphy-rose rani

[BloumagrieT]

eaternrose

Welocme sweetie

Tears are not ment to be a weakness

I strongly agrre with you

I loved your lines so keep up writing

and I'll keep enjoying reading them

[Prrety Girl]

??????Shall m y tears kill my pain
what can Isay about this words??????

[:lost lady:]

what a wonderful poem
Mash' Allah a great poet
keep it up dear sis
I loved it

[S..S]

Nice words
I enjoy reading it
Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaank you

[eastrenrose]

thanks for encourge me and for these nice comments
and for reading
May Allah bless you All