paragraph about accidents

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paragraph about accidents


What is the reasons that lead to accidents.
There are several reasons that lead to accidents.First reasons,the drivers do not interest in safety rules.sush as wear seat belt,reduce the speed on the road, etc.Second reasons,some drivers drive in worse weather condition like rainstorm,wind,fog,thunder,blizzard, etc.Third reasons,some drivers suffer from dangerous diseases like heart diseases,irritable diseases, etc that lead to accident.
Forth reasons,accident effect on pacifist people.For instance:When some cars burst the wheel and collide someone walk in the street.This things caused injury and damage for pacifist people.In conclusion,should on the government punish everyone does not care in the rules and make campaign for aware drivers.
I write this paragraph and maybe notce any erroer if anyone notce errer plz tell me

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Thanks a lot for your try . The paragraph needs some corrections
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A paragraph about accidents


What are the reasons that lead to accidents.

There are several reasons that lead to accidents.First reason,the drivers are not interested in safety rules , like wearing seat belt,reducing the speed on the road, etc.
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استخدام كلمة causes في هذا الموضوع افضل من reasons

لك كل الشكر والتقدير

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What are the reasons that lead to accidents.
There are several reasons that lead to accidents.First reason,the drivers do not interest in safety rules.such as wearing seat belt,reducing the speed on the road, etc.Second reason,some drivers drive in bad weather condition like rainstorm,wind,fog,thunder,blizzard, etc.Third reason,some drivers suffer from dangerous diseases like heart diseases,irritable diseases, etc that lead to accident.
Forth reason,accident affect on pacifist people.For instance:When some cars burst the wheel and collide someone walk in the street.This things caused injury and damage for pacifist people.In conclusion,the government should anyone does not care about the rules and make campaign for aware drivers.
I just have wrriten this paragraph and maybe notice any error if anyone notce error plz tell me


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Thank you my brothers for reading my paragraph and the same time to corrected my paragraph and this things encourage me to put more in this fourm.