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well i think your writing is flawless.by the way, you aren't ignorant neither an old fashioned but your teacher is.
now it's my turn
I'm new here. At first I thought this sight is like the other million of sites out there , poring and repeatable, but after I read some of your paragraphs I think I'll have so much fun here.
:)
انتهت لحظاتى الجميلة بينكم...
كما ينتهى أى شئ جميل فى هذه الحياة...
اعلموا أن وداعى لكم رغما عنّى
و لظروف اقوى منّي!!!
((( فتذكّرونى دائماً بالخير )))
و إن كنت اسأت لاأحدكم فليسامحنى
و إن كنت قصرت مع أحدكم فليعذر تقصيرى
واحملوا لي فى قلوبكم كل ما هو طيّب
وأخيراً
ساأرحل بجسدى وأترك قلبى بينكم
و لااااأعلم
هل لنا لقاء آخر أم أن هذا اليوم آخر عهدى بكم
وداااااااعاً
مس ثوت
Welcome to the English Club. I hope you enjoy your time with us here. I look forward to see you around. So go crazy and make new threads
mine
Hi , I am so sad and feel empty. I do not know why, but I think because of
my sisters leaving . you know today is Friday which means every one should sleep
early . I missed you my sisters and I am waiting you again
من جعل الحمد خاتمة النعم.... جعلها الله فاتحة المزيد
pretty just remember after look forward we use (verb+ing) ,don't forgetl
;-)x
my turn...
I miss all my friends, I miss all my lovers, I miss my whole world. I don't feel like I am living in my own world. I need to go back where I belong, where I am supposed to be.I need to smile, truly smile, with a loud laugh that spreads all over the place. I'm sorry to all of the people who support me, who are wanting and waiting for me to reach my dream, but I could not stand being alone, without all of you. Really, I could not. I love you all so much
انتهت لحظاتى الجميلة بينكم...
كما ينتهى أى شئ جميل فى هذه الحياة...
اعلموا أن وداعى لكم رغما عنّى
و لظروف اقوى منّي!!!
((( فتذكّرونى دائماً بالخير )))
و إن كنت اسأت لاأحدكم فليسامحنى
و إن كنت قصرت مع أحدكم فليعذر تقصيرى
واحملوا لي فى قلوبكم كل ما هو طيّب
وأخيراً
ساأرحل بجسدى وأترك قلبى بينكم
و لااااأعلم
هل لنا لقاء آخر أم أن هذا اليوم آخر عهدى بكم
وداااااااعاً
مس ثوت
My turn...
I miss all my friends, I miss all my lovers, I miss my whole world. I don't feel like I am living in my own world. I need to go back where I belong, where I am supposed to be. I need to smile, truly smile, with a loud laugh that spreads all over the place. I'm sorry to all of the people who support me, who want and waiting for me to reach my dream, but I could not stand being alone, without all of you. Really, I could not. I love you all so much
My turn
I love this forum. I was acquired several benefits from it, and I learned new vocabs, in addition I has many friends that encourage me to be better.
According to me :
My turn
I love this forum. I have acquired several benefits from it, and I have learned new vocabs, in addition I have many friends that encourage me to be better.[/QUOTE]
My Turn
This is a short message to my best enemy “ Pretty” .
Dear Pretty. I Just want to give you a piece of advice that will protect you from being kicked out of this Forum. This is the last warning.
“ Give up and ask me nicely to let you stay here and I guarantee that I will do so.
هاهي الشمعة الصغيرة التي طالما اضائت سنينا وسنينا في ذلك البيت
هاهي تنطفأ .....
تلك هي النهاية .... وهذا هو الوداع ......
My Turn
This is a short message to my best enemy “ Pretty” .
Dear Pretty. I Just want to give you a piece of advice that will protect you from being kicked out of this Forum. This is the last warning.
“ Give up and ask me nicely to let you stay here and I guarantee that I will do so.
no mistakes a according to me
Dear alanazi , I think if I just give up you will feel
surprise and may you will got a heart attack ,so I deiced to give you a chance
to giving up first and save your life
من جعل الحمد خاتمة النعم.... جعلها الله فاتحة المزيد
انتهت لحظاتى الجميلة بينكم...
كما ينتهى أى شئ جميل فى هذه الحياة...
اعلموا أن وداعى لكم رغما عنّى
و لظروف اقوى منّي!!!
((( فتذكّرونى دائماً بالخير )))
و إن كنت اسأت لاأحدكم فليسامحنى
و إن كنت قصرت مع أحدكم فليعذر تقصيرى
واحملوا لي فى قلوبكم كل ما هو طيّب
وأخيراً
ساأرحل بجسدى وأترك قلبى بينكم
و لااااأعلم
هل لنا لقاء آخر أم أن هذا اليوم آخر عهدى بكم
وداااااااعاً
مس ثوت
هاهي الشمعة الصغيرة التي طالما اضائت سنينا وسنينا في ذلك البيت
هاهي تنطفأ .....
تلك هي النهاية .... وهذا هو الوداع ......
It's perfect
MY turn
Hard to tell unless I know whether you are going to testify for me or not? But I think you will come to me at least once. Ask your heart honestly if you think I'm not the girl who could have done terrible things, you must get me out of that hell because you're a human. Or I'm not going to beg you to release me or ask for your mercy. But for your information, they will ask you too, becase you were in the same place as the witness and smart Obama will know that you were a former terrorist then he will welcome you with open arms. I'm really looking forward to seeing you here with us.
):
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Miss-Thought ; 13-12-2010 الساعة 10:59 AM سبب آخر: it's a nice story now loool
انتهت لحظاتى الجميلة بينكم...
كما ينتهى أى شئ جميل فى هذه الحياة...
اعلموا أن وداعى لكم رغما عنّى
و لظروف اقوى منّي!!!
((( فتذكّرونى دائماً بالخير )))
و إن كنت اسأت لاأحدكم فليسامحنى
و إن كنت قصرت مع أحدكم فليعذر تقصيرى
واحملوا لي فى قلوبكم كل ما هو طيّب
وأخيراً
ساأرحل بجسدى وأترك قلبى بينكم
و لااااأعلم
هل لنا لقاء آخر أم أن هذا اليوم آخر عهدى بكم
وداااااااعاً
مس ثوت
u all did well guys .So this is my turn
i'll try but i don't know may be i'll make mistakes in the correction
congratulations Miss-thought there is no mistakes
really you save me
Mine
I am still a student in the university, I am in the fifth level. I hope to finish my studing with a great degrees ,also I hope to complet my study abroad.I am crazy about anime and animation.I joined you in this club because I want to develop my language and have a nice time with you.
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة hot-meme=girl ; 15-12-2010 الساعة 10:17 PM
I am still a student in the university, I am in the fifth level. I hope to finish my studing with a great degrees ,also I hope to complet my study abroad.I am crazy about anime and animation.I joined you in this club because I want to develop my language and have a nice time with you
According to me :
No mistakes but very short sentences.
Great job
My turn now :
English club always surprises me with some new talented members who are so creative and humble at the same time. I believe that what makes English Club so special place to be in. I wish you all a very happy life and bright future.
هاهي الشمعة الصغيرة التي طالما اضائت سنينا وسنينا في ذلك البيت
هاهي تنطفأ .....
تلك هي النهاية .... وهذا هو الوداع ......
:
English club always surprises me with some new talented members whom are so creative and humble at the same time. I believe that what makes English Club so special place to be in. I wish you all a very happy life and bright future.
my turn
Before couple weeks ago I was boring . Today as such as tomorrow and
yesterday seems like today , nothing change . But now
I feel better my life is changed may its not a big changing
but at least its changed enough to let me feel exiting and active .
من جعل الحمد خاتمة النعم.... جعلها الله فاتحة المزيد
انتهت لحظاتى الجميلة بينكم...
كما ينتهى أى شئ جميل فى هذه الحياة...
اعلموا أن وداعى لكم رغما عنّى
و لظروف اقوى منّي!!!
((( فتذكّرونى دائماً بالخير )))
و إن كنت اسأت لاأحدكم فليسامحنى
و إن كنت قصرت مع أحدكم فليعذر تقصيرى
واحملوا لي فى قلوبكم كل ما هو طيّب
وأخيراً
ساأرحل بجسدى وأترك قلبى بينكم
و لااااأعلم
هل لنا لقاء آخر أم أن هذا اليوم آخر عهدى بكم
وداااااااعاً
مس ثوت
my turn......
I am so lazy today. I woke up late, and I think I caught a cold. The weather is freezing outside! I am on holiday break these days, and I do not want to take it easy. I will start studying tomorrow to prepare for the next exam. I hope I get the degree I am hoping for. Please pray for me
.
انتهت لحظاتى الجميلة بينكم...
كما ينتهى أى شئ جميل فى هذه الحياة...
اعلموا أن وداعى لكم رغما عنّى
و لظروف اقوى منّي!!!
((( فتذكّرونى دائماً بالخير )))
و إن كنت اسأت لاأحدكم فليسامحنى
و إن كنت قصرت مع أحدكم فليعذر تقصيرى
واحملوا لي فى قلوبكم كل ما هو طيّب
وأخيراً
ساأرحل بجسدى وأترك قلبى بينكم
و لااااأعلم
هل لنا لقاء آخر أم أن هذا اليوم آخر عهدى بكم
وداااااااعاً
مس ثوت
I am so lazy today. I woke up late, and I think I caught a cold. The weather is freezing outside! I am on holiday break these days, and I do not want to take it easy. I will start studying tomorrow to prepare for the next exam. I hope I get the degree I am hoping for.
Please pray for me
I'd rather write ...
Today, I was too lazy. I woke up late, and I thought I had cold because of the freezing weather. I'm on a holidaybreak these days , I don't want to take it easy so I'm planning on spending my time studying and preparing for my next exam. Hoping get to take the degree I want ( Insha Allah ) :D
I guess it's my turn now ...
hmmm... well I don't really have much to say, but it's such a brilliant idea !! members seem really into it so am I. It helps us improve our skills, communicate with eachother, and not to mention spot our mistakes therefore work on them. Let us keep the good work up
and thank you
my turn......
I am so lazy today. I woke up late, and I think I caught a cold. The weather is freezing outside! I am on holiday break these days, and I do not want to take it easy. I will start studying tomorrow to prepare for the next exam. I hope I get the degree I am hoping for. Please pray for me
Just focus on capital litters
My turn
I hope for you to take a good marks because you deserve it.
And pray to me to find a good job because I stared boring.
I hope for you to take a good marks because you deserve it.
And pray to me to find a good job because I stared boring.
I hope to get a good marks because you deserve it.
And pray for me to find a good jop because I started boring.
i think that u should use (get ) instesd of (take) because it is more suitable than take
My part is
i have a very cute cat. my father gave it to me for my birthday. i loved her so much.i named her danah. she is a very beatuiful. she has white fluffy fur and she has a little gray spot on her head and a black spot on her tail . she knows what time i come home i usually noticed that. she is my friend. when i was in univerity , i miss her so much. she eat a special food and she is so clean .when i became boring , she came to me and play with me .she always sleep early. just.
i hope it is correct my part
i have a very cute cat. my father gave it to me for my birthday. i loved her so much.i named her danah. she is a very beatuiful. she has white fluffy fur and she has a little gray spot on her head and a black spot on her tail . she knows what time i come home i usually noticed that. she is my friend. While I am in the university , i miss her so much. she eats special food and she is so clean .when I get bored , she comes to me and plays with me .she always sleeps early.
Some notes you might be interested in knowing them : try to write longer sentences and use some connection words between them.
My turn Now :
Dear Loleta
Are you out of your mind to start a war with me ???!!!! how could you even think of doing somthing like this. haven't you known that I've sent Pretty to USA main prison for Terrorists one day. I am warning you Loleta and this is the last chance; you have to decide now are you in or out.
Note:
any one who reads this part and he is not from tha chating group ; know that this is just game that we are playing in the chating fourm , nothing is serious
هاهي الشمعة الصغيرة التي طالما اضائت سنينا وسنينا في ذلك البيت
هاهي تنطفأ .....
تلك هي النهاية .... وهذا هو الوداع ......
analazil
thanks for correct my mistake
wooow
i know that she - he- it - takes the verb with s
but i was in a hurry when i wrote this passsage
so i commuited a lot of mistakes
but it is not problem
i will learn from my mistake
alanize
ur paragraph is correct
my part
i am a strong leader here in English Club. i will not leave my revenges for every body here. The most important thing that i broke the car of analize and he could not go to his work . he will not see any thing until now. so u should stop ur fightinfg because u can not do anything for me because i will break ur car again and i have a lot of plans . hhhhhhhhhh
hi all
how r u ??
you are very perfect in English m may Allah protect you all
I need your helping please
you willl find my requist here in this link
http://www.saudienglish.net/vb/showt...79#post1236779
Please help me i'll pray for you
I am a strong leader here in English Club. I'm going to take revenge no matter what. The most important thing is that I broke Alanize's car and he could not go to his work . You ain't seen nothing yet. so you better give up because i will break ur car again and you can do nothing about it plus i have plans .
My Turn
):
I really hate to play the devil's role but I have to since I have nothing to say and I'm totally bored *whispering to Loleta * hey next time you want to sabotage his car put on some seeds and let the birds do the magic, you'd be surprised of the damage they can do
I'm just saying
:smile (91
Did I just kill the game
No mistakes have been made according to me >>>>> very angrey
My Turn
Despite the fact that your part was well written, and no mistakes have been made I still think that you have made the biggest mistake in your life . Helping my enemy by giving them any kind of information that might affect my own interests is against your own benefit and will get you in troubles you would never have dreamed of. However, I still have little mercy left inside my heart so, be thankful to that and try not to take this risk again..
هاهي الشمعة الصغيرة التي طالما اضائت سنينا وسنينا في ذلك البيت
هاهي تنطفأ .....
تلك هي النهاية .... وهذا هو الوداع ......
Despite the fact that your part was well written, and no mistakes have been made. I still think that you have made the biggest mistake in your life. Helping my enemy by giving them any kind of information that might affect my own interests is against your own benefit and will get you in troubles you would never have dreamed of. However, I still have little mercy left inside my heart, so be thankful to that and try not to take this risk again
My turn
whoops !! felt scary and yet you concluded it by saying " I have mercy left inside my heart" WOW that was just so merciful of you:D maybe I should just be thankful for it ended up like this ...I give up already * waves a white flag* I come in peace and I mean no harm :P
just saying
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