Do not you dare ..........

[Mr.Salem]

This game would be so much fun and useful for all of us.
The game is very simple and challenging at the same time .
the first one writes three to five sentences about himself / herself and let the second one will correct the mistakes in the passage that he/ she wrote ; all type of mistakes are correctable. Could be grammar, punctuations, and so on ……..

Also, anyone who made some mistakes in his/her passage is required to write another three to five sentences.

I hope this game will get all of us excited to participate, and I hope you all will like it.

[Mr.Salem]

I will be the first one and I hope any member who comes after me would be able to correct my mistakes. Because we sometimes are used to writing something which is not correct unintentionally.

I am one of the Saudi club members; I’ve joined the club for about two months so far. I really enjoy being here in the club. I feel that I am with very educated people who care for each other and support each other.





Waiting for the next member

[prettyالسبهه]

haay
you
there is no mistakes here
its so perfect
I disappointed
I will try


This week I felt not well. I got sick, so I could not
Be super member in the club.
I will be good soon Enshaa Allah then I will collect
The stars a gain.
+

[smack]

I think no mistake according to me.

now my sentences
I am fresh graduate from AUL University, I will travel to UAE to receive my job, Iam felling ennui in this time until travel.

[prettyالسبهه]

I am fresh graduate from AUL University, I will travel to UAE to receive my job, Iam felling ennui in this time until travel.


I am
actually there is no real mistake but you forgot
let space

and thats my paragraph


Day by a day I feel that I get better
In English. In my home there is limited
Ways to learn English and the most useful one
Is talking with you in this club

[smack]

Perfect no mistake according to me
And thanks to tell me my mistake

Now me
I was sharing in the Saudi English to reinforce my self in English language, to become better, and to help the people who do not know how to write and talk.

[prettyالسبهه]

Now me
I was sharing in the Saudi English to reinforce my self in English language, to become better, and to help the people who do not know how to write and talk.

mmmmmm
there is no mistakes masha allah
ok
thats mine

I finished the Graduate and I got ICDL from Newhorisen.
I looked to good job in bank or something like that, but
Still now I could not find job fit with me. From three
Months ago I found job with good salary but I refused it.
It was tired work. Its start from 8 a.m. to 8 p.m.
Did I have wrong decision when I refused it?

[Mr.Salem]

According to me , few mistakes have been made



I finished the Graduate and I got ICDL from Newhorisen.
I looked for a good job in a bank or something like that, but
Still now I could not find a job fits me. three
Months ago I found a job with good salary but I refused it.
It was tired work. Its start from 8 a.m. to 8 p.m.
have I made the wrong decision when I refused it?


This is my part :
I have come back to saudi English after deciding to leave the club due to personal matters. However, I have realized that the Saudi English club is actually my second home. I miss all of the members here and I miss fighting with some of you too.

[smack]

This is my part :
I have come back to Saudi English after deciding to leave the club due to personal matters. However, I have realized that the Saudi English club is actually my second home. I miss all of the members here and I miss fighting with some of you too.

Excellence no mistake just capital litter saudi (Saudi)

Now me
I was graduate from UAL University from two month ago, I found job in a few salary 700000 L.L,
But my uncle said to me wait until make to you visa to travel on UAE to receive a good job with good salary, but in this time I feeling dullness. Because I sitting on my house without job.

[prettyالسبهه]

I was graduated from UAL University from two months ago, I found job in a few salary 700000 L.L,
But my uncle said to me wait until making to you visa to travel on UAE to receive a good job with good salary, but in this time I feeling dullness. Because I sitting on my house without job.

mine

Some people was surprising when they knew that I like
to watch anime . In fact I see its amazing . I like it so mush even its affected
on me . Sometime I feel how its so childish test I have , but
I could not stop so I decided to keep on to watch what I really like.

[smack]

I was graduated from UAL University from two months ago, I found job in a few salary 700000 L.L,
But my uncle said to me wait until making to you visa to travel on UAE to receive a good job with good salary, but in this time I feeling dullness. Because I sitting on my house without job.

mine

Some people was surprising when they knew that I like
to watch anime . In fact I see its amazing . I like it so mush even its affected
on me . Sometime I feel how its so childish test I have , but
I could not stop so I decided to keep on to watch what I really like.

Some people were surprising when they knew that I like to watch anime. In fact I see it's amazing. I like it so mush even it's affected
on me. Sometime I feel how its so childish test I have, but I could not stop so I decided to keep on watching what I really like.

Good few mistake
Now me

I was coming in Lebanon to learn in UAL University with bad language. However Allah sends to me someone to make me love English.
This person called Ms Sana who encourages me to learn more about English language. Know learning English become one of the favorite hippies.

[prettyالسبهه]

I was coming in Lebanon to learn in UAL University with bad language. However Allah sent to me someone to make me love English.
This person called Ms Sana who encourages me to learn more about English language. Now learning English become one of the favorite hobbies.

thanks to Ms Sana who pushed you then we see you here

mine
I like winter season . It is cold , cloudy and sometimes raining too .
I waiting it to enjoy by drinking coffee in the midnight . I like summer too but
in Riyadh it is so hot and tired . I can not wait more . Dear winter hurry up.

[smack]

Mine
I like winter season. It is cold, cloudy and sometimes raining too.
I am waiting it to enjoy by drinking coffee in the midnight. I like summer too but
in Riyadh it is so hot and tired. I can not wait more. Dear winter hurry up.

In Lebanon the weather is very beautiful, it is winter know, I wake with my friends under water, drink Hubble babble in warm room. And wearing a warm clothes and as you said drink coffee hahahaah.

[smack]

I forgot to said
السبههpretty
Thanks for your effort too to correct to me my mistake.

[prettyالسبهه]

In Lebanon the weather is very beautiful, it is winter now, I walk with my friends under water, drink Hubble babble in warm room. And wearing a warm clothes and as you said drink coffee hahahaah.

mine

I fall in love with tea in 13 . When I finished primary school
my mother allowed to me to drink tea . For me it was like a gift .
Before that I was hiding to drink it just to break the rule . now, I enjoying of drinking tea with Belvita (Biscuit I fall in love with it before couple months ago) end

السبههpretty
Thanks for your effort too to correct to me my mistake.

any time Bro

[smack]

In Lebanon the weather is very beautiful, it is winter now, I walk with my friends under water, drink Hubble babble in warm room. And wearing a warm clothes and as you said drink coffee hahahaah.

mine

I fall in love with tea in 13 . When I finished primary school
my mother allowed to me to drink tea . For me it was like a gift .
Before that I was hiding to drink it just to break the rule . now, I enjoying of drinking tea with Belvita (Biscuit I fall in love with it before couple months ago) end

any time Bro

Mine

I fall in love with tea in 13. When I finished primary school
my mother allowed to me to drink tea. For me it was like a gift.
Before that I was hiding to drink it just to break the rule. Now, I enjoying of drinking tea with be vita (Biscuit I fall in love with it before couple months ago) end

I was lived in UAE 10 years. The most famous drink gassy drinks like Pepsi, cola, seven up… Etc. However in Lebanon most famous drink tea, coffee, cappuccino,. …etc.
I know in this two sentence have a mistake, please tell me.

[Miss-Thought]

I 'd lived in UAE for10 years. The most famous drink is gassy drinks like Pepsi, cola, seven up… Etc. However in Lebanon most famous drinks are tea, coffee, cappuccino,. …etc.
I know in this two sentences have a mistake, please tell me.

I'm not sure about ( I had lived or I had been living or just lived) anyone knows help us

mine....


I'd lived in England for about tow years when I was 4 years old. I don't remember a lot of things when I was there. but I have a lot of photos with some British kids. they appear in photos so kind and cute

[smack]

I'm not sure about ( I had lived or I had been living or just lived) anyone knows help us

mine....


I'd lived in England for about tow years when I was 4 years old. I don't remember a lot of things when I was there. but I have a lot of photos with some British kids. they appear in photos so kind and cute

I'd lived in England for about tow years when I was 4 years old. I don't remember a lot of things when I was there. But I have a lot of photos with some British kids. They appear in photos so kind and cute

Good just focus on capital litters

I like horror and action movies, I spent one hour or two hour approximately watching movies everydays. One of the reasons that made me loves watching movies to learn or studying English language.

[Miss-Thought]

I like horror and action movies, I spend one hour or two hours approximately watching movies everyday. One of the reasons that made me loves watching movies is to learn or studying English language

I hope my correct is right


I like com-rom and action movies, I watch at least three movies per week, and I like watching series like friends, how I met your mother,....etc. I watch these TV-shows everyday. I enjoy and learn at the same time. I think it is a good way to learn

[smack]

I like horror and action movies, I spend one hour or two hours approximately watching movies everyday. One of the reasons that made me loves watching movies is to learn or studying English language

I hope my correct is right


I like com-rom and action movies, I watch at least three movies per week, and I like watching series like friends, how I met your mother,....etc. I watch these TV-shows everyday. I enjoy and learn at the same time. I think it is a good way to learn

I like com-room and action movies, I watch at least three movies per week, and I like watching series like friends, how I met your mother,....etc. I watch these TV-shows everyday. I enjoy and learn at the same time. I think it is a good way to learn


Good 1 error

There are several reasons that made me improve in English language. One of these reasons memorizes approximately one until twenty five vocabularies in the day, Listing English songs, and solved my homework without allowed to anyone help me

.

[Miss-Thought]

There are several reasons that made me improve in English language. One of these reasons memorizes approximately one until twenty five vocabularies in the day, Listing to English songs, and solved my homework without allowing to anyone helps me

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The most important thing to learn English is practice, practice makes perfect. I've been studying English for about six months. I wasn't know anything in English before I started studying but now my level is intermediate and I still need more. just read, listen and speak English all the time. good luck!l

[Mr.Salem]

According to me

There are several reasons that made me improve in English language. One of these reasons memorizing approximately one to twenty five vocabularies per day, Listing to English songs, and solved my homework without allowing to anyone helps me

*********************
The most important thing to learn English is practice, practice makes perfect. I've been studying English for about six months. I had not known anything in English before I started studying but now I am in intermediate level and I still need more. just read, listen and speak English all the time. good luck!l

Now my part :

Pretty has started a war at the chatting page , and I got involved in that war just to defeat the human rights. Actually , we have two teams ; the first one is Pretty team , and the second one is Loleta team. So , whoever would like to join the winner team is very welcome to come to our team.

[prettyالسبهه]

Pretty has started a war at the chatting page , and I got involved in that war just to defeat the human rights. Actually , we have two teams ; the first one is Pretty team , and the second one is Loleta team. So , whoever would like to join the winner team is very welcome to come to our team.

its perfect
no mistakes

mine

As a wise girl I decided to stop fighting with Loleta . I stopped it to let
a space for other members to get their chance in this chatting .
I hope they did not misunderstand me and thinking that was
a giving up

.

[smack]

Mine

As a wise girl I decided to stop fighting with Lolita. I stopped it to let
a space for other members to get their chance in this chatting.
I hope they did not misunderstand me and thinking that was
a giving up
.


On my view, withdraw from the war for you are very horrible, you can consider on your opinion without any fear from anyone and I will support you in your opinion. Just continue your war.

[Miss-Thought]

Mine

On my view, withdraw from the war for you are very horrible, you can consider on your opinion without any fear from anyone and I will support you in your opinion. Just continue your war.

From my point of view, if you withdraw for the war, you are wrong. Don't let the fear of others opinion effect your judgement and I will support your decision; to continue the war

:) i think thats it


mine

What is software? Should I have to know what is it, or does my lack of knowledge on the subject make me ignorant or old fashioned? It wasn’t my major in college, but I know how to use computers and the internet, which is all that I need. When I decided to ask my teacher about it, she laughed and answered me back, “do you know the mouse?!!” That’s what happened to me this morning:(l