"The Symphony of Desperated Heart"

[muhamedr]

A heart without a home
Without a country
Without the burdens of the pain
. And agony


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A heart without those tingles
Those feelings of pity
Those frozen tears
Muffled screams
. Of death and calamity





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A heart without a name
A nation or a place
Just wandering, with bits and pieces

Of everywhere
No real emotions, not a single sigh
And nobody to mourn it
.When it's in the sky




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Just a roaming heart
With no history
With no soul , blackened by misery

Nothing at all
. Just a heart , not even with victory

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" ' In the memory of the dead feelings , in a desperate heart' "

[smack]

Actually perfect
Thanks a lot
and I wait from you more

[Lolita 1]

wow


T. Muhamed

All of your words are Marvelous and Great



i admir these lines

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A heart without a name
A nation or a place
Just wandering, with bits and pieces

Of everywhere
No real emotions, not a single sigh
And nobody to mourn it
.When it's in the sky


this poem is a full of pain and affected ourself

so, i like these kinds of poem

this poem also is as a series of theatrical episodes

it leads us to the movement of dramatic structure and theatrical imagery



I just wanna say

So glad to be the first one to pass here

thanks a lot


Have alovely time

i am always waiting for new poem

be fine


lolita

accept my passing by

[muhamedr]

thank you all my brothers &Sisters