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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : My Last Unheard Words!



JuSt Me
07-12-2005, 11:44 PM
Heart of stone walk in dawn
A dying soul chasing time

Walk aside and be quiet
He has to reach before it's time

I am his doctor and I can say
He has few words left to say
Slowly he did, raised his head

A few words bravely stepped
However, they never reached to his lips
They radically failed to make another step

No body was able to hear them
He had had plenty of time
He could say lots of them

Sorry, time is done
The man is gone
After a long, long racing
Time has won.

The few words is still unheard
Leaving lots of wonders regarding them

SuPeRLaRk
08-12-2005, 03:37 AM
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ASorry, time is done
The man is gone
After a long, long racing
Time has won.

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wowo its very nice poem
we are waiting more from you!
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اسيــ حبه ــرة
08-12-2005, 12:26 PM
Allow me to say .. You writings reflects how

much talent you have.. and true feelings

you present... You suprise me every time I read

them ... I wish you success and happiness

May Allah bless your efforts

زهرة وفى
09-12-2005, 01:23 AM
thanks darling

it's beautiful poem

May Allah bless you

keep on

ميس
09-12-2005, 07:16 AM
thanks alot
it's really agood poem
God blass you

JuSt Me
10-12-2005, 02:59 PM
I am so glad that you like my poem, thanks for everything and of course your wonderful replies... :o

Thanks SuPeRLaRk,
Thanks اسيــ حبه ــرة
and
Thnaks ميس.