[align=left]المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة JuSt Me
wowo its very nice poem
we are waiting more from you!
Heart of stone walk in dawn
A dying soul chasing time
Walk aside and be quiet
He has to reach before it's time
I am his doctor and I can say
He has few words left to say
Slowly he did, raised his head
A few words bravely stepped
However, they never reached to his lips
They radically failed to make another step
No body was able to hear them
He had had plenty of time
He could say lots of them
Sorry, time is done
The man is gone
After a long, long racing
Time has won.
The few words is still unheard
Leaving lots of wonders regarding them
Whatever you do, you should do it with feeling
[align=left]المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة JuSt Me
wowo its very nice poem
we are waiting more from you!
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة SuPeRLaRk ; 08-12-2005 الساعة 03:56 AM
Allow me to say .. You writings reflects how
much talent you have.. and true feelings
you present... You suprise me every time I read
them ... I wish you success and happiness
May Allah bless your efforts
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة اسيــ حبه ــرة ; 09-12-2005 الساعة 12:36 PM
ENJOY
thanks darling
it's beautiful poem
May Allah bless you
keep on
thanks alot
it's really agood poem
God blass you
I am so glad that you like my poem, thanks for everything and of course your wonderful replies... :o
Thanks SuPeRLaRk,
Thanks اسيــ حبه ــرة
and
Thnaks ميس.
Whatever you do, you should do it with feeling
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