مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : ~*~I'm glad~*~
الغاليه
06-01-2006, 01:49 AM
this is my latest poem.....hope u like it
Feeling lost for so long
Time seemed an endless song
Sad, mournful, tedious song
Till reality hit me strong
I've always wished you'd be mine
Waiting for the slightest sign
Just a smile and I'd be fine
The gloomy nights start to shine
And yet, you're far
Distant like a star
Do you hear my trembling voice!!
Or did I make an awful choice??
forgive me, for now I know
Your role was just a show
You never loved me, not even close
Playing games with no remorse
Is that your way to punish me?!!
For giving you the best in me?!!
Caring less for my despair
With your joy, you never share
Lived my life in loneliness
Played my part of foolishness
Growing pain inside my soul
bitter feelings began to crawl
till reality hit me strong
you're not the place where I belong
your heart has been an icy cave
from witch my self I must save
loving you was fake mistake
now it's time to take a break
I've been cuffed for so long
Trapped in your hurtful song
Now I'm glad I found me
Set free, with dignity
No more chains, or misery
Since you are history
English Lover
06-01-2006, 02:40 AM
thanx so much algaliah
You've a sensitive feeling
It's nice to read your poems
to touch its power on hearts
we hope
to keep on
الغاليه
06-01-2006, 02:56 AM
thanx so much algaliah
You've a sensitive feeling
It's nice to read your poems
to touch its power on hearts
we hope
to keep on
and it's always such a joy 4 me 2 read ur reply dear bro
ur sweet words make my day:o
I can't thank u enough
I'm glad that ur the first 2 read it:cool:
اسيــ حبه ــرة
06-01-2006, 09:29 AM
we are glad to see your poems comes
regularly ... Keep on this great writings
JuSt Me
06-01-2006, 12:52 PM
And yet, you're far
Distant like a star
It's too nice!
What an awesome expressions ... feelings blow the heart of listens.
Amazing poem :rolleyes:
الغاليه
06-01-2006, 06:43 PM
we are glad to see your poems comes
regularly ... Keep on this great writings
thank u dear for ur reply
glad u liked it
الغاليه
06-01-2006, 06:45 PM
It's too nice!
What an awesome expressions ... feelings blow the heart of listens.
Amazing poem :rolleyes:
not as nice as ur words dear bro
joy fills my heart when I see ur reply
thank u:o
tootalshaam
10-01-2006, 02:28 AM
so glad with urs ..... darling
it's so nice
keep on plzzzzzzzz
Dr_subahi
10-01-2006, 09:26 AM
Sea of Emotions
by Herlinda M. Giles
Lost for so long in a deep sea of feeling
Can't get control of the thoughts, that keep reeling
Direction- unknown; where's it all heading
Utter confusion and panic are spreading
Waves start to swell and the boat begins leaking
and, yet, still no sign of the land she is seeking
Horror takes over with no hope in sight
what started as worry, turns into shear fright
Pictures of lives past flash into her vision
with little time left, she makes her decision
She whispered a prayer.. then dove off the side
and started to swim, along with the tide
Hours past by with no sight of firm ground
She fought for her life, with hopes she'd be found
Several years later, her story's still told
A heart full of love that had sadly, turned cold
When the waves crash to shore, you may still hear her cries
for the body may perish... but the soul never dies
U have a nice and sensitive soul
dr_subahi@yahoo.com
الغاليه
10-01-2006, 07:35 PM
so glad with urs ..... darling
it's so nice
keep on plzzzzzzzz
thanks darling 4 ur sweet words
happy that u liked it
الغاليه
10-01-2006, 07:38 PM
Dr_subahi
thank u 4 passing and ur comment
the poem is amazing
الهمة العالية
10-01-2006, 11:13 PM
you have stolen my heart!!!
soo harmful your feeling to wards me!!
you are so hard...so difficult..my dear...
I like all your faces even.......they .....kill me hundred times aday......
this is my trail to write poetry....
sooooooooooo wonderful your poem.......my darling....keep it up...
الغاليه
11-01-2006, 04:00 PM
you have stolen my heart!!!
soo harmful your feeling to wards me!!
you are so hard...so difficult..my dear...
I like all your faces even.......they .....kill me hundred times aday......
this is my trail to write poetry....
sooooooooooo wonderful your poem.......my darling....keep it up...
I like the thought that u and I are alike
thanks soooo much 4 passing & 4 ur lovely words
May Allah bless u dear
even though am not so sure its ur poeam and u made it but i hope am wrong and i appologize if i am wrong and if u are right and u made it i would like to tell u woooooow u r better than the people who speak the language in maing the poeams God bless and keep up the great poeams flowing
الغاليه
12-01-2006, 01:25 PM
even though am not so sure its ur poeam and u made it but i hope am wrong and i appologize if i am wrong and if u are right and u made it i would like to tell u woooooow u r better than the people who speak the language in maing the poeams God bless and keep up the great poeams flowing
be sure that I wrote it by my own
I like writing in Arabic since I was 13
and I started writing in English when I was in college
believe me...I never lie about my writings...and I respect my self above all:o
but since u think that it might not be mine....am glad and proud..cause it means only one thing...that it's soooo good
I really appreciate ur compliment
u don't need to apology;) ..thank u soooooo much dear sister...
May Allah bless u
almaster
12-01-2006, 02:50 PM
we have gifted member we`re so lucky 2 have u here
pretty nice poem
الغاليه
12-01-2006, 02:54 PM
we have gifted member we`re so lucky 2 have u here
pretty nice poem
and I'm sooo lucky 2 be with u
thanx alooooot dear brother...ur words mean so much 2 me
زهرة وفى
15-01-2006, 12:10 AM
wo0o0o0o0o0w
you are great and incrdiable
thanks my sis
keep on
we are waiting.....May Allah bless you
الغاليه
15-01-2006, 04:10 AM
wo0o0o0o0o0w
you are great and incrdiable
thanks my sis
keep on
we are waiting.....May Allah bless you
u r the greatest
thank u dear
looooooove u
almaster
15-01-2006, 04:46 PM
my dear sis `am just telling the truth
keep giving
we`re waiting
الغاليه
15-01-2006, 06:32 PM
my dear sis `am just telling the truth
keep giving
we`re waiting
thanx million time:cool:
I hope I don't let u down
DR AHLAIN
16-01-2006, 07:55 PM
Ghaliah
Wonderful poem..really I have astong feeling that you will be a great poet
You embaress us with your poems which show your feeling mixed with immagination
Thank you very much cuz you respond to me when I ask for more poems
Finally, I'm so sorry for my reply because it's very late
my best regards
الغاليه
17-01-2006, 12:57 AM
late better than never:cool:
thank u so much 4 ur kind words
u give me too much credit
I really appreciate it
SuPeRLaRk
23-01-2006, 01:39 AM
my dear every thing from you we
must like it
really its nice poem
الغاليه
23-01-2006, 03:29 AM
my dear every thing from you we
must like it
really its nice poem
am glad u read it dear bro
thanx 4 ur sweet words:cool:
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