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[اميرهـ الورد]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

ارجوا ان تخبروني هل مقالي صح ولا خطأ


Hi, my name is lana i am 15 years old .
today i will talk abut some think i am so proud of it s start:when i was a child i keep 4 parts of al qoran so they give me Certificate .
when i was in elementry school i asked my mom to go to institute she agreed


الله يساعد ويوفق اللي يساعدني
وشكرا مقدما

[2LoveEnglish]

wa alikoum assalam
i propose these changes :)

Hi, my name is lana i am 15 years old .
today i'd like to talk about something i am so proud of :when i was a child i learned by heart 4 parts of the holy quoran so i've got a certificate
when i was in elementry school i asked my mom to go to institute she agreed