poem lovers

[Wiill Vandom]

Hi again
one of the things that I love is poetry
So I think it would be nice if each of us write few lines and the one after
writes another one but in the same topic
I wish that I can take part ..but I'm not good at it..

[7up]

dear wiill

Sorry I could not catch what you meant can you explain by adding examples

[marygain]

it is a nice idea .....so......show us what you have

[Meant To be]

Well nice idea for sure

but brother what about if each one writes 2 lines and the next completes that in the same topic as you said

so each one could have the chance to write rhymed-lines


?This is my opinion what do you think

[Aseel]

Meant to be's idea is a challenging one

Why not trying it

I feel like I really wanna do it


Waiting for your suggestions

[enigma]

I loved the suggestion

But does it have to be on the same topic

Why don't you leave it up to our own choice

I mean why doesn't each one choose a piece of writing that he/she likes most

Waiting to hear from you dear sis

[Wiill Vandom]

Well we can make this change
as meant to be said
& as anigma said
Ok the changes are two lines ,if it not in the same topic at least it must be close to it
I'm sorry M.G
you know I'm not that good at poetry but I realy love it

[Wiill Vandom]

Come on Aseel you can do it sister
It seems that you love challenges
And
meant to be
I think it 's better to call me sister not brother cause I'm a Girl

[Meant To be]

Ok sister, sorry for call you brother; rolleyes


After reading all the replies I think we have reached our goal, so shall we start or what

[Wiill Vandom]

come on who is going to break the ice and start

Ihave somebody in my mind





come on Aseel you said you love challenges



come on everybody


hey, meant to be why don't you start??

[Aseel]

ok I will start


How do I love thee? Let me count the ways

I love thee to the depth and breadth and height

my soul can reach


Elizabeth Browning

[Try To Reach]

LooooooooooL
am I late

i love poems I wrote many of them but i made the rules for my poems and not following any

Dear Wiill happy to see this thread too

here my participation
frome my old papers


Still ,, I'm walking When In my eyes

Routes got narrowed The dark darkened

And the beautiful face of dawn

loomed patchy, scratchy and catchy

Still ,, I was walking

My trauma is a laugh weeping And my tears

Coz of the weeping trauma laughing