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[كآوي]

السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركآته

آول مره اتجرى وآطلب خدمه في منتدآكم الجبآر يآليت تنفذوون طلبي

انآ حآلين آدرس في معهد في استرآليآ والوقت آكيد بيننآ مختلف وعندي قطعه وطلووبه في الآختبآر ولآزم تكون صحـه 100 عشآن آعــدي

فيهآ ضيع مستقبل وخرآب بيووت

فيآليت وآحد من نجوومكم الموجودين في المنتدي يتكرم ويصحح لي وا يضيف بعض التعديلآت

يآرب اني آحصل اي شخص في المنتدي ذآ يوقف مـعي في اللغه ذي لين التخرج والله شآيل همهآ

يآليت ترسلو التصحيح على الآيميل لآني بكون في المعهد وبآخذه منك ومآ آقدر آدخل الآ على ايميل بس
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وبرضه الي مستعد يوقف مـعي ويتبننآ بس مجرد التصحيح لي لآن معهدنآ يعتمد على الرآيتنق والتعبير ذبحونآ فيه

بسم الله
Dear Dany

Thanks for your letter! I am very happy that your are going to visit my country let me tell you about the places I recommend.

If you want to have a good holiday in mountains, I would recommend my favorite place, Shafa. It is many tall trees. Also it has many tourists go there. It has many hotels, and excellent apartment nearby and cheaper. The mountains is very big and beautiful. It is very clean and wonderful for mountain climber. It is very good for ran or walk. The weather is very nice and rain.

You asked me about what clothes and equipment to bring. If were you, maybe the weather is cold. I would pack and some t-shirts and shorts. It may get much cold at night, so bring a sweater, raincoat and sweater too. Also It is good idea to bring a pair of walking boots. Do not forget your sunglasses for sun in the morning and your camera, the scenery is so beautiful, and perfect for photography.

I hope that you will enjoy yourself in Shafa. If you want to know anything else, just drop me a line.



Best wishes,


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[fmm3698]

Dear Dany

Thanks for your letter! I am very happy that your are going to visit my country let me tell you about the places I recommend.

If you want to have a good holiday in mountains, I would recommend my favorite place, Shafa. It is many tall trees. Also it has many tourists go there. It has many hotels, and excellent apartment nearby and cheaper. The mountains is very big and beautiful. It is very clean and wonderful for mountain climber. It is very good for ran or walk. The weather is very nice and rain.

You asked me about what clothes and equipment to bring. If were you, maybe the weather is cold. I would pack and some t-shirts and shorts. It may get much cold at night, so bring a sweater, raincoat and sweater too. Also It is good idea to bring a pair of walking boots. Do not forget your sunglasses for sun in the morning and your camera, the scenery is so beautiful, and perfect for photography.

I hope that you will enjoy yourself in Shafa. If you want to know anything else, just drop me a line.



Best wishes,


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انصحك اول شي تفهم استخدام اللغة وبعدين فكر في الكتابة

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