look at the sky

[Petunia]

LOOK AT THE SKY

Look up there, what do you see



In the sky, how could it be?



Stars and moon are sparkling



Sun with them is shining



My dream was in a similar side



which lived happily in my mind



Thoughts were it'd come true



And success would come through



It was sparkling just like that moon



Immediately died and all left it alone



It was like stars in that high



Struggled with pain and then died



When I meet people I feel shy



How could they believe my lie?



About that dream that I have told



Froze and died because of clod



Whatever you did your best



Never be afraid to take a test




by : pink-pen

[M.o_o.N]

What a cute poem my dear Pinky :D

Its simple and nice but to be honest I didnt like the last two lines .

I admire your creative poem ,keep it up huny

[ACME]

These line are beautiful and touching . They are the outcome of strong imaginative mind
The more you write , the more perfect you will be . So keep on and make the sky's the limit

[Petunia]

What a cute poem my dear Pinky :D

Its simple and nice but to be honest I didnt like the last two lines .

I admire your creative poem ,keep it up huny

hey dear whatever you criticize I'll appreciate your opinion

what i meant by those two last lines was whatever you dreamt and

did your best to make that dream to come true don't be disappointed

if it fed away just consider it as a test in your life

thanks for passing by and i really be happy when i see your comment

[Petunia]

These line are beautiful and touching . They are the outcome of strong imaginative mind
The more you write , the more perfect you will be . So keep on and make the sky's the limit

thank you brother your words they are really motivated but i'm not that much perfect writer at all

i just expressed the inner feelings with some imaginative thoughts

well each line that you wrote is highly appreciated

best wishes

[BloumagrieT]

Whatever you did your best

Never be afraid to take a test

Never feel shy to try and never feel shy to fail

One day some of your dreams will come true

Thank you dearest

pink-pen

[DIMPLES]

pink-pen

you cant imagine how much i was
joyful while reading your interesting
poem..I am proud of you dear

I expect you to be a rival to the
english poets..

dont feel surprised because you CAN

^_^

[Sun rays]

So beautiful words
keep going

[جاكوار2]

[:lost lady:]

Thanks a lot for sharing with us your lovely lines

[هـلا]

:

superb words my dear

go on

[Petunia]

Whatever you did your best

Never be afraid to take a test

Never feel shy to try and never feel shy to fail

One day some of your dreams will come true

Thank you dearest

pink-pen

you are most welcome sis


really i appreciate your visiting


thanks wish you the same dear

[Petunia]

pink-pen

you cant imagine how much i was
joyful while reading your interesting
poem..I am proud of you dear

I expect you to be a rival to the
english poets..

dont feel surprised because you CAN

^_^

LOL can you imagine i would be a poets...oh come on


i don't think so lol


glade dear cause of your motivation..really thank you

[Petunia]

So beautiful words
keep going

thank you for the nice words

and for passing by


my respect to you

[Petunia]

thanks jojo

happy to see you around sis

[Petunia]

Thanks a lot for sharing with us your lovely lines

my pleasure dear

thanks for being here

[Petunia]

:

superb words my dear

go on

well really happy to see here friend


you surprise me when i found your reply


thanks for passing by

[محمد الحافظ]

you deserve it .. all the replies above were beautiful and you really deserved those ones .. your words were touching and they reflected your faith and soul . thank you and i hope i was a nice guest

[Petunia]

you deserve it .. all the replies above were beautiful and you really deserved those ones .. your words were touching and they reflected your faith and soul . thank you and i hope i was a nice guest

thank you brother a lot for the compliment


your passing and comment are highly appreciated


and you are welcome here

:)