تصحيح برجراف قصه

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السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته ,,

الاستاذه عطتنا قصه وطلبت منا نهايه للقصه ابغى انتقادكم بالاسلوب والتعبير
اريد رايكم على كامل البرجراف


His brother to send a message to gang ask them to burn the farm of his brother staged gave him the King and after asking the gang for a place farm mistaken in the name of the miner and they mention his brother's name and they burned his ranch at night so he brother scared and spent the night grumbling and backfired