Tomorrow I’ll be strong

[star* M]

السلام عليكم

اعزائي أرجو ان تعطوني وجهة نظركم في هذه الاسطر بكل صراحة

Tomorrow I’ll be strong




Tomorrow I’ll be strong

If you think that I’ll be sad you are wrong

I’ll let my happiness so long

You can hear my tongue

Say and say I’ll forget your love with song

Tomorrow I’ll be strong

Because you pained my heart

Cut my soul part, part

You burnt my blood by love’s heat

Finally , I find myself without haunt

But not like this I stay ; I should your love fight

For that , I tell you from my life go out

And my name you should forget

I feel that I’m fortunate

Because I have a good heart

Song always tomorrow I’ll be strong; that’s right

Star* M

[Beauty]

Really it is a wonderful poem

do you write it yourself ?

[E-courses]

IT is Ok but from my point of view the rythem is not going well

[● Ṡeяεиiτч . . ☆]

well chosen words + honest feelings = beautiful lines .
thank you sweetie.

[star* M]

Really it is a wonderful poem

do you write it yourself ?

Yes, I do


Thanks for your pass

[star* M]

IT is Ok but from my point of view the rythem is not going well

Any way it is your point of view


Thanks for your pass

[star* M]

well chosen words + honest feelings = beautiful lines .
thank you sweetie.

Thank you soooooooo much

you shine my page

Thx 4 ur pass

[حور33]

It's very nice poem
I lime it ver very much
Thank u , Go ahead

[star* M]

It's very nice poem
I lime it ver very much
Thank u , Go ahead

Thank you sooooooooo much

you shine my page